Question

15．假設(shè)你是李華，你和學(xué)校外教Mr．Brown 約好周末去岳麓山玩，但你因故不能赴約．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)用英語(yǔ)給他寫(xiě)一封電子郵件：
1．表示歉意
2．解釋原因
3．另約時(shí)間．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右
      2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫
      3．開(kāi)關(guān)和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Mr．Brown，
I am Li Hua，your student in class 12        ．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一封電子郵件．寫(xiě)作時(shí)，首先要寫(xiě)清要點(diǎn)，包括：表達(dá)歉意，解釋原因，另約時(shí)間．其次，要注意使用第一人稱(chēng)．最后還要注意時(shí)態(tài)，以一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主．
重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)和句型：
further study 深造
pick sb up 接某人
spare some time 抽時(shí)間
allow sb to do sth 允許某人做某事
I am indeed very sorry that I can't go to Yuelu Mountain with you next week．
句中that連接賓語(yǔ)從句．
Just now，my cousin，Xiao Ming，who went to Australia for his further study last year，informed me that he would return next Saturday morning．
句中who引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句修飾my cousin；that連接賓語(yǔ)從句．
I sincerely hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation．
句中hope后接賓語(yǔ)從句．

解答 Dear Mr Brown，
I am Li Hua，your student in Class 12．I am indeed very sorry that I can't go to Yuelu Mountain with you next week．（高分句型一）I feel uneasy about it and want to tell you what happened．（表達(dá)歉意）
Just now，my cousin，Xiao Ming，who went to Australia for his further study last year，informed me that he would return next Saturday morning．（高分句型二） He wanted me to pick him up at the airport．You know，we haven't seen each other for nearly a year，so I can't spare the time to go out with you．（解釋原因）
I sincerely hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation．（高分句型三） I would appreciate your allowing me to make another date to go there and have fun together．（另約時(shí)間）
Yours，
Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 書(shū)面表達(dá)題考查的是英語(yǔ)的應(yīng)用能力．寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意：要點(diǎn)的提煉要全；關(guān)鍵短語(yǔ)和句型要寫(xiě)對(duì)；過(guò)渡詞和過(guò)渡短語(yǔ)要自然，通順地道；最后還要注意人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)使用要正確．