Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是李華，想戒除網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲癮。請你給澳大利亞筆友Isaac寫一封郵件求助，包含以下要點：
1)、寫信目的；
2)、網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲?qū)δ愕挠绊懀▽W(xué)習(xí)，生活方面)：
3)、尋求建議或幫助。
注意 1)、詞數(shù)100左右：
2)、可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Isaac,
How are you? I'm writing to ask you for help.
Recently I have been addicted to a popular online game, which I find difficult to get rid of. I spend a lot of time on it and often stay up late. As a result, I feel sleepy in class during the day and I can't focus on my study and, as expected, I get left behind. What's worse, my parents often complain about my terrible hobby so we're having a tough time getting along with each other.
I've realized that playing the game does me too much harm and I must change this. I know you once gave up online game successfully, so could you tell me how you made it? I would be so thankful if you could help me!
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本題是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李華的身份給澳大利亞筆友Isaac寫一封郵件，向他求助幫你戒除網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲癮。寫作要點已經(jīng)給出，屬于提綱類作文，內(nèi)容包括：1、寫信目的；2、網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲?qū)δ愕挠绊懀▽W(xué)習(xí)，生活方面)：3、尋求建議或幫助。根據(jù)求助信的特點，開頭要點明寫信目的，最后期待回信。以第一人稱為主，第二人稱為輔。主要用現(xiàn)在完成時和一般現(xiàn)在時來寫。寫作時要注意要點全面，表達清楚，態(tài)度誠懇。還要注意高級語言和詞匯的運用。如定語從句which I find difficult to get rid of.賓語從句that playing the game does me too much harm and I must change this.和how you made it.