【題目】假定你是李華，是Writing.Com的會員，近日收到如下郵件，邀請你嘗試成為付費會員并上傳作品。請結合郵件給予回復，解釋你之前未上傳作品的原因，并提出建議。

Hello, Li Hua!

We noticed you’ve never tried a Writing.Com paid membership or upload any writing, so we’re offering you a discount to give it a go…

A BIG discount: Take 50% off any paid membership of $19.95 or more.

Visit our shop: http://Writing.Com/main/shop/cat/Memberships

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3.開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Sir or Madam,

I have received your email which offers me a big discount. ___________________

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Li Hua

【答案】

Dear Sir or Madam,

I have received your email which offers me a big discount. I am writing to thank you for your kind offer. In the past years you have offered me a lot of help but I have never tried a Writing.Com paid membership, for which I feel really sorry. I never tried because I am not good at operating computers and don’t know how to pay to get your membership. I think the following suggestions may be of some help to you.

First, writings on your website need to be updated frequently for I find some articles are kind of old. Next, you should show your users how to be a membership clearly. Finally, I really hope for a bigger discount.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本次作文要求寫一封回信。要點包括：解釋你之前未上傳作品的原因，并提出建議。故既要完成任務，又要兼顧形式的要求。

寫作亮點：本篇條理清楚，要點全面，結構連貫。其句式上的變化既使得文章生動而流暢，也體現(xiàn)了作者駕馭句式的能力。例如：文章運用了定語從句which offers me a big discount.和for which I feel really sorry. 狀語從句because I am not good at operating computers frequently, be of some help等詞匯及First, Next, Finally等連接詞。

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