【題目】短文改錯

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(^ )，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

The other day, as I walked to school, I passed small construction area. It was not far away in my school. I notice a man bringing a bunch of things: shoes, blankets, some canned food, and clothing. Perhaps the items were gathered from his family and some of his friend. He started laying it down for people to take. Certainly, I was curious about what things would be going. But I rushed there after school. I saw that much of the items were taken by others. I have read lots of inspired stories of kindness. This is probably the sweetest act of kindness I’ve been witnessed so far.

【答案】

【1】第一句: 在small前加a；

【2】第二句: in改為from；

【3】第三句: notice改為noticed；

【4】第四句: friend改為friends;

【5】第五句: it改為them；

【6】第六句: what改為how；

【7】第七句: But 改為So；

【8】第八句: much改為many;

【9】第九句: inspired改為inspiring;

【10】第十句: 去掉been

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于記敘文閱讀，介紹了幾天前我在上學(xué)的路上看見一位好心人把收集來的物品分發(fā)給需要的人的事情。

【1】第一句: 在small前加a；考查冠詞。本句中名詞construction area是可數(shù)名詞，前面加a表示泛指。句意：幾天前，當(dāng)我步行去學(xué)校的時候，我經(jīng)過一個很小的建筑工地。

【2】第二句: in改為from；考查介詞。句意：這個工地離我們學(xué)校不遠(yuǎn)。介詞短語far away from...遠(yuǎn)離....。

【3】第三句: notice改為noticed；考查時態(tài)。根據(jù)第一句的時間狀語the other day幾天前，說明這是一件過去發(fā)生的事情，要適應(yīng)一般過去時，所以本句使用過去式noticed。

【4】第四句: friend改為friends; 考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)。句意：也許這些物品是ongoing他的家人和朋友那里收集過來的。句中的family指家人，表示復(fù)數(shù)意義，后面的friends也應(yīng)該使用復(fù)數(shù)形式，與之對應(yīng)。

【5】第五句: it改為them；考查代詞。本句中代詞them指代前句中的復(fù)數(shù)名詞a bunch of things。而it指代單數(shù)或不可數(shù)名詞。

【6】第六句: what改為how；考查賓語從句連接。句意：當(dāng)然，我很好奇事情會如何進(jìn)行。本句中how引導(dǎo)賓語從句，在句中作狀語。what是連接代詞，在句中充當(dāng)主語、賓語或表語，不能做狀語。

【7】第七句: But 改為So；考查連詞。句意：當(dāng)然，我很好奇事情會如何進(jìn)行。于是，放學(xué)以后我離開跑到那里。上下文之間是因果關(guān)系，所以使用連詞so，but表示上下文的轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系。

【8】第八句: much改為many; 考查代詞。代詞much指代不可數(shù)名詞，many指代可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)形式。本句中名詞items是可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)形式，所以使用many指代。

【9】第九句: inspired改為inspiring; 考查形容詞。過去分詞轉(zhuǎn)換的形容詞通常修飾人，或與人有關(guān)的事物；現(xiàn)在分詞轉(zhuǎn)換的形容詞通常修飾事物，本句中story應(yīng)該使用inspiring修飾。

【10】第十句: 去掉been; 考查語態(tài)。句意：這也許是近年到目前為止我所見過的最善意的行為。本句使用主動語態(tài)即可，沒有被動含義。

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