Question

【題目】短文改錯

假定英語課上老師要求同桌間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

As is often the case, when people are attending to meetings, having meals or waiting for buses, you can always find them addicting to their phones, completely ignoring others.

This is really a commonly phenomenon in our life. The reason is why smart phones nowadays can be used for people to play mobile games and kept in touch with friends through QQ and WeChat. Therefore, too much exposure to phones are bad for people in terms of health. Moreover, people involved in phones fail to communicate well with these around them.

As far as I am concerned, people should wisely make use of their phones to help their work and study. Meanwhile, care much about their family and friends rather than mobile phones.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】去掉to

【2】addicting→addicted

【3】commonly→common

【4】why→that

【5】kept→keep

【6】Therefore→However

【7】are→is

【8】these→those

【9】在help和their work之間加with

【10】much→more

【解析】

【1】去掉to 考查介詞。attend參加，為及物動詞，故去掉to。

【2】addicting→addicted 考查固定用法。你總是會發(fā)現(xiàn)他們癡迷于手機。be addicted to對…上癮。故把addicting改為addicted。

【3】commonly→common 考查形容詞。此處修飾名詞phenomenon，應該用形容詞。故commonly改為common。

【4】why→that 考查連接詞。這是因為智能手機可以被用來玩游戲等。the reason is that...原因是。故why改為that。

【5】kept→keep 考查時態(tài)。此處為and連接兩個并列的動詞不定時。故kept改為keep。

【6】Therefore→However 考查連詞。然而過多使用手機對孩子的健康有害。故Therefore 改為However。

【7】are→is 考查主謂一致。too much exposure to phones是主語，謂語動詞應用單數(shù)。故are改為is。

【8】these→those 考查代詞。此處應用those代指周邊的那些人。故these改為those。

【9】在help和their work之間加with 考查介詞。人們應該使用手機來幫助其工作和學習。help with sth.幫助某事。故在help和their work之間加with。

【10】much→more 考查語境。與此同時，多多關注他們的家人和朋友，而不是手機。故much改為more。