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8．請閱讀下面材枓，并按照要求用英語寫一篇150詞左右的文章．

Bike-sharing has taken off in China far faster than in any other market．The market has become flooded with new companies in recent months．The bike-sharing companies operate in a similar way．They use apps that allow users，after paying a deposit，to unlock the wheels with their smartphones．After the journey，users can leave bikes anywhere in public and pay a little money for the use．The service is very popular as it provides an effective solution to"the last kilometer"problem．

The promoting of the bike-sharing service is also raising questions about profitability，wide-spread bike vandalism （破壞） and theft，and growing government regulation．A Hong Kong man who was arrested for throwing several shared bikes into rivers said he had no regret destroying them because"the GPS devices in the bikes give away users'personal information，such as their locations．"

【寫作內(nèi)容】
1．用約30個單詞概述上述信息的主要內(nèi)容；
2．用約120個單詞發(fā)表你的觀點，內(nèi)容包括：
（1）支持成反對共享單車的推廣；
（2）用2-3個理由或論據(jù)支撐你的觀點．
【寫作要求】
1．寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句；
2．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱；
3．不必寫標(biāo)題．
【評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】
內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇還貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)．
The passage conveys to us the bike-sharing boom across the country，with more companies springing up in the market．The service not only brings great convenience to people，but causes some problems as well．
From my standpoint，bike-sharing system has become an essential part of public transportation in cities and should be actively promoted．Firstly，with an increasing number of people choosing the service to get around，the number of cars on the roads will decrease dramatically，which really helps the environment and reduces traffic jams．Furthermore，this service also benefits individuals in various ways．For example，it provides locals and tourists with a convenient，cheap and healthy means of transport．Those who would otherwise use their own bicycles don't need to be concerned about such problems as theft，storage and maintenance．
In a word，bike sharing is an innovative service，which relieves urban traffic pressure and brings citizens enormous benefits．And more shared bikes should be launched into the market．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認(rèn)真審題，找準(zhǔn)提示語中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準(zhǔn)確定位人稱、時態(tài)．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認(rèn)真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等
高分句型一：
The passage conveys to us the bike-sharing boom across the country，with more companies springing up in the market．The service not only brings great convenience to people，but causes some problems as well
這篇文章向我們展示了全國范圍內(nèi)的自行車共享熱潮，市場上涌現(xiàn)出更多的公司，這不僅給人們帶來了極大的便利，而且也帶來了一些問題．
高分句型二：
Firstly，with an increasing number of people choosing the service to get around，the number of cars on the roads will decrease dramatically，which really helps the environment and reduces traffic jams．
首先，隨著越來越多的人選擇服務(wù)繞過，道路上的汽車數(shù)量將大幅減少，這真的有助于環(huán)境和減少交通擁堵．

解答 Possible version one
The passage conveys to us the bike-sharing boom across the country，with more companies springing up in the market．The service not only brings great convenience to people，but causes some problems as well（高分句型一）．
From my standpoint，bike-sharing system has become an essential part of public transportation in cities and should be actively promoted．Firstly，with an increasing number of people choosing the service to get around，the number of cars on the roads will decrease dramatically，which really helps the environment and reduces traffic jams（高分句型二）．Furthermore，this service also benefits individuals in various ways．For example，it provides locals and tourists with a convenient，cheap and healthy means of transport．Those who would otherwise use their own bicycles don't need to be concerned about such problems as theft，storage and maintenance．
In a word，bike sharing is an innovative service，which relieves urban traffic pressure and brings citizens enormous benefits．And more shared bikes should be launched into the market．（163 words）

點評 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎(chǔ)進(jìn)行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學(xué)生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語言運用和組織方面的能力，而且對學(xué)生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求