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4．假設(shè)你叫李華，你從報(bào)紙上得知世界上8種熊中有6種面臨滅絕的危險(xiǎn)．你決定給世界野生生物基金會(huì)（WWF）寫(xiě)信反映這一情況，提出你的建議和希望．
注意：1．詞數(shù)：100左右，信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給 出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫；
3．參考詞匯：熊類bear species
☆瀕危原因--人類活動(dòng)：
1．熊的某些部位可以用作貴重的藥物；2．棲息地遭到破壞．
☆建議：1．建立更多的保護(hù)區(qū)；2．立法禁獵熊類．
Dear Sir or Madam，
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   Please give a hand to the endangered bears．They need help to survive．
Yours sincerely
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
Scientists say that humans are their biggest threat because some parts of bears are very expensive as medicine．科學(xué)家說(shuō)人類是他們最大的威脅，因?yàn)樾苌眢w的某些部位和藥物一樣貴重．
高分句型二：
To save bears，I think more reserves for bears should be set up so that they can live freely there．
為了拯救熊，我認(rèn)為更多的保護(hù)區(qū)應(yīng)該被修建起來(lái)，那樣他們可以自由的生活．
句型一 ①that humans are their biggest threat 該句是一個(gè)由that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句，that在句中不作句子成分  ②because some parts of bears are very expensive as medicine．該句是一個(gè)由because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句
句型二 ①To save bears 該部分為不定式位于句首作目的狀語(yǔ)②so that they can live freely there 該句是一個(gè)由so that 引導(dǎo)的目的狀語(yǔ)從句

解答 Dear Sir or Madam，
I've learned from a newspaper that six of eight bear species in the worldare dying out．Scientists say that humans are their biggest threat because some parts of bears are very expensive as medicine．（高分句型一）That's one of the reasons why bears are often killed．In addition，many habitats of bears are being destroyed as a result of human activities，so bears are losing their homes．（滅絕原因）To save bears，I think more reserves for bears should be set up so that they can live freely there．（高分句型二）Laws should be passed to prevent people from killing bears．（提出建議）
Please give a hand to the endangered bears．They need help to survive．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 該書(shū)面表達(dá)為提綱類，該類作文一般規(guī)定了考生的寫(xiě)作思路，羅列出了相應(yīng)的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)．考生在平時(shí)應(yīng)注意積累相應(yīng)的詞匯和短語(yǔ)，在寫(xiě)作時(shí)盡量做到將要點(diǎn)與主題緊密結(jié)合，用準(zhǔn)確的、簡(jiǎn)潔明了的語(yǔ)言將作文展示出來(lái)．