Question

你校開展了 “敬重父母”的活動(dòng),請你根據(jù)以下表格內(nèi)容為你校的英語報(bào)刊寫一則報(bào)道。
【寫作內(nèi)容】

案旨	尊敬父母是中華民族的傳統(tǒng)美德(moral value)之一
現(xiàn)狀	大多數(shù)同學(xué)都是獨(dú)生子女 (the only child)，以自我為中心，不關(guān)心父母
決定	開展“敬重父母”的活動(dòng)
措施	制定(work out)了十條規(guī)定，提出要求。如：要記住父母的生日；父母進(jìn)門要和他們打招呼(greet) 等。

【寫作要求】
只能使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部的內(nèi)容。
標(biāo)題與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總句數(shù)。
【評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】
句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。
Respecting Parents Program
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The program has been winning praises from parents and society. People say that is what we
should have done earlier.

Answer 1

Respecting Parents Program
Showing respect to parents is one of the Chinese traditional moral values. However, as most students today are＂the only child” in their family, they often regard themselves as the “centre” of the family without caring much about their parents. To improve this situation, our school has started a program, which is called “Respecting Parents Program”. Ten “Dos” have been worked out for the students to follow. For example, we are expected to remember our parents’ birthdays and express our good wishes to them and greet them when we see them returning home.
The program has been winning praises from parents and society. People say that is what we should have done earlier.

試題分析：這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫作，寫一則報(bào)道。文章的要點(diǎn)基本上都給了出來，考生只需要翻譯清楚即可，難度不大。在寫作的時(shí)候也不能逐字逐句的翻譯，要運(yùn)用合適的連接詞把要點(diǎn)串聯(lián)起來，形成一個(gè)整體。選擇詞匯的時(shí)候要選擇相對高級的詞匯，也要運(yùn)用多種句型，讓文章更有變化。寫作中注意應(yīng)用一些比較經(jīng)典的句式短語等來提高作文的文采，注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)。為了使表達(dá)更有邏輯性，適當(dāng)使用序數(shù)詞，連接詞等。
點(diǎn)評：此類作為首先要做的就是認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不能跑題偏題。寫作中注意一些基礎(chǔ)的寫作常識，不犯低級錯(cuò)誤。只要平時(shí)積累足夠，就一定能獲得滿意的分?jǐn)?shù)。另外為了應(yīng)付考試，可以有選擇的背誦一些范文，這樣應(yīng)考時(shí)就會(huì)有法可依。