Question

【題目】

Tomorrow's World Book Day has inspired a slew of literary events throughout the capital. Xing Yi and Liu Zhihua report.

As World Book Day, April 23, approaches, various reading events are being held by government agencies, libraries and bookstores throughout the capital.

At the launch of the 5th Beijing Reading Season in Great Canal Park in Tongzhou district on Saturday night, 81-year-old Yin Zhiguang, head of Beijing Elocution Troupe, led the audience in reciting a poem.

Activities focusing on different readerships will highlight World Book Day in bookstores throughout Beijing, such as picture book sharing for children in Xidan Book Building, conversations with musicians and authors for young people in Sanlian Bookstore, talks with diplomats for people interested in international affairs in Wangfujing Xinhua bookstore, and a 12-hour late-night reading marathon for night owls at One-Way Space bookstore.

Recently, we conducted a survey about how many extra-curricular books students read per year. On average, each student read 5.34 books, which is definitely not adequate compared with their counterparts from the Western countries. It is upsetting to see the outcome. When asked what students in our school do in their spare time, they claim that they tend to watch TV and surf the Internet, for they can have great fun. Some students even complain that they are forced to attend some extra make-up classes so that they have no time to play, not to mention reading books.

School authority is planning to launch a campaign to encourage students to read more extra-curricular books.

寫作內容

1. 用30個左右詞概括上文的主要內容。

2. 分析學生課外閱讀量不足的原因(至少兩點)。

3. 談談讀書的好處(至少兩點); 以及你對增加課外閱讀量建議(至少兩點)。

寫作要求

1.作文中可以參照閱讀材料的內容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。

2.作文中不得出現真實姓名和學校名稱。

Answer 1

【答案】

With World Book Day drawing, various activities are held in Beijing to highlight the importance of book reading. But a recent survey shows students prefer to watch TV or surf the Internet rather than read books.

The survey sets me thinking why fewer students choose to read books in their spare time. There are some reasons accounting for this phenomenon. First of all, most students are burdened with too much homework. Still others haven’t formed a habit of reading. They would rather spend their spare time on TV or the Internet for fun.

However, reading has many benefits. Through reading we can learn more about the world. Besides, it can help us think better. Last but not least, reading can make our life more colourful.

I think teachers are supposed to limit the amount of our homework so that we can have more time to read. For another, it’s a good idea to form reading clubs and learn from each other.

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于讀寫任務寫作，動筆前，一定要認真閱讀原文，并理解內容。認真看清題目要求，這篇書面表達給了一段材料：先要求以約30個詞概括上文的主要內容，要求有很高的概括提煉的能力，要抓住文章的主題，再以約120個詞寫一篇短文，按照要點去表達，不能有遺漏，寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系。寫作時盡量使用自己會的單詞、詞組和句型，同時也要注意使用一些高級語法和句型，使自己的文章更有文采。

【亮點說明】這篇范文要點全面，語言精煉，簡單句和復雜句交叉使用：如But a recent survey shows students prefer to watch TV or surf the Internet rather than read books.這句話用了賓語從句；here are some reasons accounting for this phenomenon.這句話運用了動名詞作定語的結構；學生在寫作時也要注意用平時在課本中或是閱讀中積累的單詞句型來自如的表達自己的意思，本文運用了prefer to…rather than do…、form a habit of、be burdened with、account for等短語；文中使用合適的連接詞把各要點聯系成文，如first of all, however, Last but not least, for another等。