Question

假如你是李華， 收到筆友Mary的來信如下， 請你針對信中Mary遇到的問題進行回復(fù)， 給她提出建議。

Dear Li Hua ,

     How are you ?

     I am having trouble with my desk mate Jenny at the moment . Last week , we had a maths test .The test was important and everyone had prepared for it except Jenny .

     During the test , she asked me to help her. I refused and didn’t let her copy from my paper .As a result , she failed the test .She is angry with me and hasn’t talked to me since then . Now I don’t know how to deal with this problem .Can you give me some advice ?

     I’m looking forward to your reply .

                                                           Yours

                                                            Mary

寫作要點：

給Jenny 寫信，告訴她誠實的重要性及作弊的壞處。

幫助她學(xué)習(xí)數(shù)學(xué)，使她對學(xué)習(xí)數(shù)學(xué)充滿信心。

如果她的英語比你的好，可以讓她幫助你學(xué)英語，因為互幫互助可以加深（deepen ）友誼。

詞數(shù)要求：100左右（開頭已給出， 不計入總詞數(shù)）

Dear Mary，

     I’m sorry you are having trouble with your friend.

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     Best wishes . 

                                                             Yours

                                                             LiHua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear Mary

I’m sorry you are having trouble with your friend. Here are some tips that may help you.

First, if Jenny doesn’t talk to you, why not write to you? You can explain the importance of being honest and the harm of cheating in the exam. I’m sure she will understand you. Also, you can try to help her with her maths so that she can make progress and believe in herself. If she is better than you in English, you can ask her to help you with your English, I’m sure your friendship will be deepened by helping each other.

Best wishes.

                                                          Yours

                                                          LiHua

【解析】

試題分析：本題為材料作文，根據(jù)高考的評分要求，從兩個方面分析題目。一是內(nèi)容,主要有以下幾個方面：①誠實的重要性。②作弊的壞處。③幫助他學(xué)習(xí)數(shù)學(xué)，樹立學(xué)習(xí)數(shù)學(xué)的信心。④如果他的英語好，讓她幫學(xué)英語，增強友誼等幾個方面。二是語言方面。要有精華的句子，起到畫龍點晴的作用。例如，固定結(jié)構(gòu)，倒裝，強調(diào)等。

【亮點說明】本篇文章條理性很強，這是其有點之一。第二，文章中使用了較復(fù)雜的句子，例如you can try to help her with her maths so that she can make progress and believe in herself.使用了結(jié)果狀語從句。

考點: 考查學(xué)生語言的綜合運用能力