Question

假如英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改句子，請你修改你同桌寫的以下句子。每句中均有一處語言錯誤。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（∧) ，并在其下面寫出該加的詞．

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．

修改：在錯的詞下面劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞。

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Many young boys and girls had the habit of smoking, though they are middle school student. As we all know, smoking do harm to human beings. More and more people have realized that how serious this problem is. But they are never boring with it. Some people think smoking is a kind of fashion, and the other think smoking can refresh himself. In fact, smoking causes many illnesses. The most serious illness causing by smoking is lung cancer. Meanwhile, smoking is the waste of money. What’s worse, careless smokers may cause danger fires.

 

Answer 1

1.had改為 have

2.student 改為 students

3.do 改為 does

4.realized 后的that去掉

5.boring 改為 bored

6.other 改為 others

7..himself 改為 themselves

8.causing 改為 caused

9.the waste of money 中the 改為 a

10.danger 改為 dangerous

【解析】

試題分析：很多年輕的男孩子和女孩子有吸煙的習(xí)慣，盡管他們還只是高中生。他們認(rèn)為吸煙是一種時尚，也能夠讓他們精神振作。但是眾所周知，吸煙有害健康，會引起很多種疾病，其中最嚴(yán)重的是肺癌。此外吸煙還會造成火災(zāi)。

1.had改為 have 考查動詞時態(tài)。Many young boys and girls had the habit of smoking, 本文講述的是一種社會現(xiàn)象，應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時，主語是復(fù)數(shù)名詞boys，所以把had改為have。

2.student 改為 students 考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)。though they are middle school student. 主語和動詞都用的是復(fù)數(shù)形式，所以學(xué)生應(yīng)該是復(fù)數(shù)students。

3.do 改為 does 考查主謂一致。As we all know, smoking do harm to human beings. 動名詞做主語時，謂語動詞應(yīng)該用單數(shù)形式，因為文章用的是一般現(xiàn)在時，所以把do改為does。

4.realized 后的that去掉 考查連接詞。 More and more people have realized that how serious this problem is. Realized后面是賓語從句，從句是以how引導(dǎo)的感嘆句 ，而that是引導(dǎo)陳述句做賓語從句，所以把that去掉。

5.boring 改為 bored 考查形容詞。 But they are never boring with it. 。boring形容事物的特征，意思是“令人煩的，煩人的”，bored形容人的心理狀態(tài)，意思是“感到厭煩的”。 本句主語是人，固定短語：be bored with “對….感到厭煩”，所以把boring改為bored。

6.other 改為 others 考查代詞。and the other think smoking can refresh himself.根據(jù)上文語境可知此處指其他同學(xué)們，是復(fù)數(shù)的概念，而the other 指兩者中的另一個，所以把other改為others。

7.himself 改為 themselves 考查代詞。and the other think smoking can refresh himself.。 句中指的是學(xué)生們吸煙為了讓他們自己消除疲勞，所以把himself改為themselves。

8.causing 改為 caused 考查非謂語動詞。The most serious illness causing by smoking is lung cance。在句中causing by smoking 是后置定語，和被修飾名詞illness之間是被動關(guān)系，所以用過去分詞，把causing改為caused。

9.the waste of money 中the 改為 a 考查冠詞。Meanwhile, smoking is the waste of money.固定短語：a waste of time /money 浪費時間、浪費金錢，所以把the改為a。

10.danger 改為 dangerous 考查形容詞。 What’s worse, careless smokers may cause danger fires。Danger是名詞“危險，帶來危險的人或物”，修飾名詞fires應(yīng)該用形容詞，把danger改為dangerous。

考點：考查短文改錯。