Question

假如你叫周凱，你的美國筆友Tom想了解你如何保持健康的(keep fit)，你樂意與之分享(share…with)。請根據(jù)下列信息寫一封回信，談?wù)勀惚３纸】档拿卦E。
1. 首先，健康的飲食習(xí)慣很重要；
2. 母親確保你吃得健康( make sure )；
3. 你不喜歡甜食 (have a sweet tooth) ，吃更多水果、蔬菜和魚；
4. 其次，鍛煉也很必要(take exercise)；
5. 你酷愛足球，(be crazy about)是班隊(duì)的隊(duì)長并且每天至少鍛煉兩小時(shí)。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)80左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總次數(shù)。
2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫流暢。

Answer 1

You want to know about how I keep fit. Now I’d like to share my way of keeping fit with you.
First, healthy diet habit is very important. My mother makes sure that I eat healthily. Luckily, I don’t have a sweet tooth and I eat more fruit, vegetables as well as fish. Second, it is necessary to take exercises. I’m crazy about football and captain of the class team. I take at least two hours’ exercise a day. So I’m healthy. What’s your secret of keeping fit ?
Looking forward to hearing from you.

試題分析：本文是一篇書信體作文。作文的主旨是：談?wù)勀惚３纸】档拿卦E。主要包括兩大方面的內(nèi)容：飲食和鍛煉。文章的重要短語都已經(jīng)提示出來了，而且要點(diǎn)比較齊，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫流暢就行了，寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式。
點(diǎn)評：注意回信作文首先要簡短的提一下寫信人的問題，用一個(gè)承接的句子，如本文中You want to know about how I keep fit. Now I’d like to share my way of keeping fit with you.
還可以記住一個(gè)通用的開頭格式：Thanks for your letter. I'm very glad to hear from you.(謝謝你的來信，收到你的信我非常高興)這是一個(gè)比較通用的回信開頭。其他的內(nèi)容要依據(jù)來信內(nèi)容或者要向?qū)Ψ疥愂龅膬?nèi)容而定。