Question

假如你叫李華，根據(jù)圖表提示，給你的加拿大網(wǎng)友Smith 寫(xiě)一封信，介紹你的寒假生活（共20天），可根據(jù)自己的實(shí)際情況添加細(xì)節(jié)。
注意：1．詞數(shù)：100左右； 2．開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Smith,
How are you? How time flies! Now the winter vacation was over and I have come back to school again.        
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Answer 1

How are you? How time flies! Now the winter vacation was over and I have come back to school again.
We had 20 days in all for the holiday, during which we had the most important Chinese Festival—the Spring Festival. It took me nearly a week to visit my relatives and attend family parties, as it is a traditional custom in China. Of course, I spent most of the time doing my lessons. As you know, I will take the National Examinations in June and it’s only a few months away. Every day I did some English reading, practiced writing compositions, worked out a number of science problems and so on. When I got tired, I would do something to relax myself, like playing basketball with my friends, listening to music, surfing the Internet, playing games, and everything that helped to recover my energy.
In a word, I had a full, busy and wonderful holiday. How about you? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua

試題分析：圖表分析作文就是將數(shù)據(jù)、圖像所包含的信息，轉(zhuǎn)化為表意的說(shuō)明文字；不僅要弄清提示，還要看懂所給的圖表和數(shù)據(jù)；提示內(nèi)容少，信息點(diǎn)分散，審題時(shí)一定要領(lǐng)會(huì)作者的出題意圖，弄清主題再動(dòng)筆分析“要寫(xiě)的要點(diǎn)”注意要點(diǎn)的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)方式 連接成句 連句成篇 修改定稿 文章的結(jié)構(gòu)：Part1：General Idea （圖表反映的問(wèn)題或總體趨勢(shì)） Part2：Facts （具體數(shù)據(jù)或事實(shí)）Part3：Reasons（原因分析）Part4：Solution or personal opinions ： 解決方法或個(gè)人建議）同時(shí)注意謀篇布局的順序，運(yùn)用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時(shí)選擇高級(jí)的詞匯和語(yǔ)法項(xiàng)目讓文章更有文采。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】We had 20 days in all for the holiday, during which we had the most important Chinese Festival—the Spring Festival. 這句話用了定語(yǔ)從句，It took me nearly a week to visit my relatives and attend family parties, as it is a traditional custom in China. 這句話用了it做形式主語(yǔ)和原因狀語(yǔ)從句， As you know, I will take the National Examinations in June and it’s only a few months away. 這句話用了非限制性定語(yǔ)從句， When I got tired, I would do something to relax myself, like playing basketball with my friends, listening to music, surfing the Internet, playing games, and everything that helped to recover my energy.這句話用了定語(yǔ)從句，