Question

【題目】The summer holiday had come to an end before I knew it. Like any other kid, I came to a new school with a suitcase. There were six of us living in a small room about fifteen square meters. Luckily, everything went on well in the first three weeks.

A week ago, one of my roommates brought in a very large suitcase and placed it under her bed, but days later, she found something wrong with her suitcase. As we live on the ground floor, her case soon got wet. She took it out and after drying it up, she just put it on her desk because she had no other choices. I happened to be opposite her desk and her suitcase was so large that it not only occupied the whole of her desk but half of mine as well. I was very much annoyed, so I angrily pushed it forward without first talking to her about it. I pushed a bit too hard and the case fell off her desk, messing up everything it contained. On seeing this, she flew into a temper and angrily shouted at me. The quarrel started and lasted about two hours.

When I calmed down days later, I thought over the quarrel and began to see something. I should have talked to her about it first and then worked with her to find a solution to the problem. Living in a room with limited space, we should learn to get on well with one another.

【寫作內(nèi)容】

1．以30個詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容。

2．用大約120詞對“處理同學(xué)之間的矛盾”這個話題發(fā)表看法，內(nèi)容包括：

1) 你喜歡寄宿學(xué)校嗎？為什么？

2) 同一宿舍的同學(xué)之間常常會出現(xiàn)哪些問題？

3) 舉例說明你或你的室友在矛盾出現(xiàn)后是怎么解決的。

【寫作要求】

1．在作文中可以使用白己親身的經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；

2．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

Answer 1

【答案】

The writer’s roommate put her suitcase on her desk but it occupied part of the writer’s desk, which annoyed the writer and triggered a quarrel. After calming down, the writer realized the importance of getting along well with roommates.

Frankly speaking, I favour boarding schools. Living in boarding schools brings us peers together, enabling us to build a harmonious relationship as well as to learn from each other. Besides, I would have never acquired some basic living skills without boarding school life. Thanks to such a strict routine, I become more self-disciplined, which will be an advantage for my job hunting in the future.

However, some problems inevitably arise in the same dormitory. For instance, it is not unusual to come into conflict with other roommates because of misunderstandings, improper words as well as different lifestyles. Additionally, one might be offended by other roommates if he or she has totally different habits, which is likely to cause tease and sarcasm.

When it comes to the conflict with roommates, I still well recall one of my own experiences. I used to get up one hour earlier before the bell rang when others were sound asleep. Unavoidably, the noise caused by me became a source of annoyance to them, resulting in a serious conflict. At first, we blamed each other without making any compromise but soon on second thought, I realized my fault, apologized to them sincerely and asked for a negotiation. Fortunately, we reached an agreement and solved the problem smoothly. I am fully convinced that it is mutual understanding and forgiveness that are crucial to addressing the problems in the dorms.

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于讀寫任務(wù)寫作，動筆前，一定要認(rèn)真閱讀原文，并理解內(nèi)容。認(rèn)真看清題目要求，這篇書面表達(dá)給了一段材料：先要求以約30個詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容，要求有很高的概括提煉的能力，要抓住文章的主題，再以約120個詞寫一篇短文，按照要點去表達(dá)，不能有遺漏，寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。寫作時盡量使用自己會的單詞、詞組和句型，同時也要注意使用一些高級語法和句型，使自己的文章更有文采。

【亮點說明】這篇范文要點全面，語言精煉，詞匯短語使用豐富：occupied，triggered a quarrel引起了一場爭吵，getting along well with，build a harmonious relationship，acquired，Thanks to，inevitably，F(xiàn)or instance，When it comes to；簡單句和復(fù)雜句交叉使用如：which will be an advantage for my job hunting in the future.，which is likely to cause tease and sarcasm.是兩句定語從句，it is not unusual to come into conflict with other roommates 雙重否定表示肯定之意，具有強調(diào)作用，it is mutual understanding and forgiveness that are crucial to addressing the problems in the dorms.強調(diào)句。此外，文章使用了Besides，However，Additionally等詞連接，是文章條理通順。