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3．假設你是李華，你的英國筆友Mark來信說對我國的三亞很感興趣．請你給他回封郵件，簡單介紹以下內容：
1．三亞地處中國海南省南部，因美麗的海濱景色和四季如夏的氣候而聞名；
2．三亞已發(fā)展成為最受歡迎的國際旅游城市之一，十分宜居；
3．其中著名的景點天涯海角和大東海等吸引了眾多海內外游客．
旅游城市 a tourist city  天涯海角  the end of the seas and skies  大東海 Big east sea
要求：詞數(shù)120左右．
Dear Mark，
I am very glad to hear from you．Now I will introduce Sanyato you，which you are interested in．
Sanya is one of the most famous tourist cities in southern Hainan Province of China and it is well-known for its beautiful seaside scenery and warm weather all the year around．In recent years，it has developed into a popular tourist city．The beautiful scenery and warm climate throughout the year make the city a good place to visit．The attractions include Tianyahaijiao （The end of the seas and skies） and Dadonghai （Big east sea）．
With all it provides，it attracts a lot of tourists from home and abroad every year．If you want to spend a beach vacation for fun，you will never get disappointed at Sanya．
Yours，
LiHua．

Answer 1

分析 這是介紹三亞的一篇作文．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．內容包括：一點明書信目的；二介紹三亞的位置，氣候和旅游特色；三歡迎來三亞旅游．高分句型：1．Now I will introduce Sanya to you，which you are interested in．句子里introduce Sanya to you表示"向你介紹三亞"； which引導非限制性定語從句，代指先行詞Sanya．現(xiàn)在我給你介紹你所感興趣的三亞市．2．With all it provides，it attracts a lot of tourists from home and abroad every year．句子里 it provides是省略了關系詞that的定語從句，修飾先行詞all；tourists from home and abroad 表示"來著國內外的游客"．因為它所能提供的這一切，三亞每年都吸引來著國內外的許多游客．

解答 Dear Mark，
    I am very glad to hear from you．Now I will introduce Sanya to you，which you are interested in．【高分句型一】（點明書信目的）
   Sanya is one of the most famous tourist cities in southern Hainan Province of China and it is well-known for its beautiful seaside scenery and warm weather all the year around．In recent years，it has developed into a popular tourist city．The beautiful scenery and warm climate throughout the year make the city a good place to visit．The attractions include Tianyahaijiao （The end of the seas and skies） and Dadonghai （Big east sea）．（介紹三亞的位置，氣候和旅游特色）
   With all it provides，it attracts a lot of tourists from home and abroad every year．【高分句型二】If you want to spend a beach vacation for fun，you will never get disappointed at Sanya．（歡迎來三亞旅游）
                                                                                                                                                                                                                           Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                            LiHua

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