Question

17．假如你是李華，你校正在開展安全教育，圍繞"中學(xué)生是否有必要帶手機去學(xué)校"進(jìn)行討論，請給校報編輯寫一封信，介紹討論情況并發(fā)表自己的意見．
大多數(shù)同學(xué)認(rèn)為：可方便與家長、同學(xué)聯(lián)系；是一種時尚．        
大多數(shù)老師認(rèn)為：中學(xué)生年齡尚小，還不能自控；用手機玩游戲，發(fā)短信浪費時間；容易引起攀比； 使用校園內(nèi)公用電話．
你的觀點：
注意：
1．信的開頭已為你寫好．  
2．詞數(shù)：100左右，不含已給出的字?jǐn)?shù)．
3．參考詞匯：攀比：vie with…在校園內(nèi)：on the campus
Dear editor，
I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we've had about whether it is necessary for middle school students to carry mobile phones to school．
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Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
The majority of the students think that it is more convenient for them to keep in touch with their parents and classmates if they have a mobile phone．大多數(shù)學(xué)生認(rèn)為如果他們有手機，就更方便和他們的父母、同學(xué)保持聯(lián)系．
句中含有復(fù)合句，think后是賓語從句，從句中含有if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句．
句型二：
In my opinion，following the fashion is understandable．在我看來，追求時尚是可以理解的．
句中含有動名詞做主語．

解答 Dear editor，
I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we've had about whether it is necessary for middle school students to carry mobile phones to school．
The majority of the students think that it is more convenient for them to keep in touch with their parents and classmates if they have a mobile phone．And what's more，it's a fashion．（一種觀點）
However，most teachers think that middle school students are not old enough to control themselves．【高分句型一】It is a waste of time for students to play games and send messages to each other by mobile phone．And it's easy to cause the students to vie with each other．【高分句型二】If necessary they can make phone calls by using public phones on the campus．（另一種觀點）
In my opinion，following the fashion is understandable．But as middle school students，we should put all our heart into our studies．（表達(dá)作者的觀點）

點評 有正反觀點的英語書面表達(dá)中，要明確兩中不同的觀點，呈現(xiàn)作者的觀點，適當(dāng)使用關(guān)聯(lián)短語，使得文章連貫．