Question

文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加，刪除或修改。
增加： 在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)， 并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除： 把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在其下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意： 1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限1詞；
2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
Zhang Xiaowen, who is sixteen, a middle school student in Northern China. She is one of the best student in her class and she was won an award for young scientists last year. When sitting in the classroom she looks just like all her classmates and after class her life is obvious different. She was born without the ability to use her legs and she has no feeling below the waist. She had to use a wheelchair to get around and it often takes her a little long to do everyday things, such as getting out of bed, getting dressing and going to the school. So far she has created many programs and one of which received an award at her province’s science fair.

Answer 1

【小題1】a middle school student 前加is
【小題2】student—students 
【小題3】去掉was
【小題4】and—but  
【小題5】obvious—obviously
【小題6】had—has
【小題7】long—longer
【小題8】dressing – dressed  
【小題9】去掉 the
【小題10】which 改 them

解析試題分析: 16歲的張曉文是一名中學(xué)生，她是她班上最優(yōu)秀的學(xué)生之一，并且在去年她獲得了小科學(xué)家獎。當(dāng)坐在教室里的時候，她和旁人無異，但是事實上她課下的生活卻是與別人大相徑庭的，因為她出生就有殘疾，不能活動，但即使這樣她還是取得了令人矚目的成績。
【小題1】a middle school student 前加is 。Zhang Xiaowen, who is sixteen, a middle school student in Northern China.在此句中who is sixteen是定語從句，其余部分是主句，主句中缺少謂語動詞，根據(jù)主謂一致的原則和文章時態(tài)可以判斷加is。
【小題2】student—students 。She is one of the best student in her class。One of 后面跟復(fù)數(shù)名詞表示“其中之一”，故把student改為students。
【小題3】去掉was。and she was won an award for young scientists last year.句子主語she和動詞won之間是主動關(guān)系，所以去掉was。
【小題4】and—but 。and after class her life is obvious different .根據(jù)上文語境可知此處強調(diào)一種轉(zhuǎn)折，指她上課時看上去和別人一樣，但是課下卻是不一樣的，故把and改為but。 
【小題5】obvious—obviously。and after class her life is obvious different.修飾形容詞different應(yīng)該用副詞，所以把obvious改為obviously。
【小題6】had—has。She had to use a wheelchair to get around根據(jù)語境可以判斷此處是敘述她現(xiàn)在的情況，應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時，所以把had改為has。
【小題7】long—longer。and it often takes her a little long to do everyday things.由上下文可知此處指她每天的日常活動都要比別人花費更多的時間，所以應(yīng)該用比較級，把long改為longer。
【小題8】dressing – dressed 。such as getting out of bed, getting dressing。固定短語：get dressed“穿衣服”，所以把dressing改為dressed。
【小題9】去掉 the。and going to the school.固定短語：go to school“去上學(xué)”，故把the去掉。
【小題10】which 改 them。and one of which received an award at her province’s science fair.因為句中有并列連詞and，所以判斷后面是并列句，應(yīng)該用人稱代詞，故把which改為that。
考點：考查短文改錯。