【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。作文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

All of we students want to grow up healthily and happily. Here are my tips to you to achieve this goal.

First of all, we should have the positive attitude to life. As we all know, there is not only sunshine but also hard times in our life. So when face with difficulties, we should fight against them bravely. Moreover, working hard is essential that it will contribute to realizing our goal. The reason is because knowledge is power. Only by working hard we get the power to make contribution to our motherland. Final, taking exercise regularly and having balanced diets is also of great importance.

The healthier we are, the happier we will be.

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本文屬于說明文，介紹保持健康的幾條建議。

第一處：考查代詞。分析句子可知，us 與students為同位語關(guān)系，可知說話者身份為學(xué)生，故把our改為us。

第二處：考查介詞。分析句子可知，為了誰，表用途，用for，而to表示向，故把to改為for。

第三處：考查不定冠詞。attitude為可數(shù)名詞，第一次提及，用不定冠詞，故把the改為a。

第四處：考查非謂語動詞。句意:當(dāng)面對困難的時候，我們應(yīng)該勇敢地與困難作斗爭。分析句子可知，So when face with difficulties,為省略了主語和be動詞的時間狀語從句，本句為短語be faced with面對，故把face改為faced。

第五處：考查副詞。句意：此外，努力工作是必不可少的，因為這有利于實現(xiàn)我們的夢想。分析句子可知，本句為結(jié)構(gòu)so …that如此以至于，故在essential前加so，也可以在that 前加in，in that在于，引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句。

第六處：考查表語從句。分析句子可知，knowledge is power作表語，是對the reason的解釋說明，從句結(jié)構(gòu)完整，故把because改為that。

第七處：考查情態(tài)動詞。句意：只有努力工作，我們才有能力為我們的祖國做貢獻。分析句子可知，Only by working hard表示條件，只有努力工作，我們才能夠，因此需要在we前加can或者will。

第八處：考查名詞。句意：只有努力工作，我們才有能力為我們的祖國做貢獻。本句為短語make a contribution to或者make contributions to 為…做貢獻，故在contribution前加a，或者把contribution改為contributions。

第九處：考查副詞。分析句子可知，final修飾整個句子，需用副詞，故把Final改為Finally。

第十處：考查主謂一致。句意：最后，定期鍛煉以及均衡飲食也是很重要的。分析句子可知，本句主語taking exercise regularly and having balanced diets為復(fù)數(shù)，故謂語需用復(fù)數(shù)形式，故把is改為are。

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