Question

2．Directions：Write an English composition in 120-150words according to the instructions given below in Chinese．
描寫一件你珍藏的物品．文章要具體說(shuō)明何時(shí)、何地、怎樣得到這件物品以及為什么珍藏到現(xiàn)在．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：句型一：①The reason why I still keep it in my memory is ②that it reminds me of an old saying：there must be a use for one's talent．The reason why…是以reason為先行詞，關(guān)系副詞why引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句．在that引導(dǎo)的表語(yǔ)從句中含有短語(yǔ)remind sb．of sth．使某人想起某物．句型二：①When I was ten years old，there was an old man ②living in my neighborhood．when引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，在從句中作狀語(yǔ)．living是現(xiàn)在分詞作后置定語(yǔ)，與其邏輯主語(yǔ)man是主動(dòng)關(guān)系．

解答 In my drawer，there is a deliberate wooden toy horse．（開門見山，指出珍藏的物品）It was a gift from an old man in my neighborhood when I was still veryyoung．The reason why I still keep it in my memory is that it reminds me of anold saying：there must be a use for one's talent．【高分句型一】When I was ten years old，therewas an old man living in my neighborhood．【高分句型一】He didn't have theopportunity to study in school，but he learned how to make wood furniture．Everytime people went to ask him to solve some problems of furniture，he waswilling to help them．To my surprise，in his spare time，he would make some toys with small piece s of wood．Some ofthem were sold to the toy store and others were given to us．（具體說(shuō)明何時(shí)、何地、怎樣得到這件物品）The moment I see the lovely toy horse made by this old man，I wouldremember the happy childhood．The old man impressed me deeply with his talent andkindness．From the little horse toy，we can see whatever kind of talent you have，you canfind your own method to display your talent and bring love to others．（這件物品為什么珍藏到現(xiàn)在的原因）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本文要求描寫一件你珍藏的物品，要具體說(shuō)明何時(shí)、何地、怎樣得到這件物品以及為什么珍藏到現(xiàn)在．所以在寫作時(shí)必須審好題，不能遺漏任何一條．在準(zhǔn)確表述內(nèi)容的基礎(chǔ)上，爭(zhēng)取多用些從句，非謂語(yǔ)和短語(yǔ)使文章生動(dòng)，上檔次．