Question

假定你是李華，你的朋友李明寫信告訴你他因不善交友而苦惱。請根據(jù)下面提示給他寫回信，提出建議。
提示：1.友善，樂于助人。
2.多與他人交流。
3.多參加活動。
注意：1.詞數(shù)：100左右
2.可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使短文連貫。
3.開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總數(shù)。
參考詞匯：communicate 交流。 activity 活動
Dear Li Ming,
________________________________________________________________________                   Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Li Ming,
I`m sorry to hear you`re feeling worried for failing to make friends. Some tips below may be helpful to you.
First, be kind, friendly and polite to others and always ready to help others, through which you`ll get well paid. Second, try to communicate with others more, for it helps strengthen your ties with friends and lots of misunderstandings can be avoided. Third, take an active part in activities, such as sports,  games, travels, parties, etc. This way, you`ll get more chances to communicate with others. Besides, it is also very important that friends should be faithful to each other.
Anyhow, there are many ways to develop a good friendship. Hope you will get along well with your friends.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua

試題分析：本文屬于半開放性的作文，只是給出一些大概的要點(diǎn)，給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大�？梢詮呐c他人交往中所遇見的問題著手，提醒要站在對方的立場看問題，少說多聽，不要隨便發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)。多與他人交流，不要拘謹(jǐn)。在寫作的時(shí)候要合理運(yùn)用語法規(guī)則，靈活運(yùn)用連接詞如first, second, third等等。也要使用一些相對高級的句型，讓文章更有文采。
點(diǎn)評：半開放性作文的考查對考生有一定的難度，因?yàn)橐�考生仔�?xì)篩選要點(diǎn)，在組織成文。在寫作的時(shí)候要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型讓文章更有文采。