Question

請仔細(xì)觀察以下三幅連環(huán)圖片的內(nèi)容，并想象第四幅圖片可能的發(fā)展，寫出一個(gè)涵蓋連環(huán)圖片內(nèi)容并有完整結(jié)局的故事。

注意：? 1．詞數(shù)不少于80；

??????? 2．開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

??????? 3．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

??????? 4．在答題卡上作答。

??? Tom’s mother，Mary，a kind and hardworking mother，runs a noodle restaurant．

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Answer 1

【答案】

Tom’s? mother Mary runs a noodle restaurant .One afternoon, Tom was doing his homework on the counter in the restaurant when a customer came for a bowl of noodles , Obviously he was in a hurry for he left his bag behind as he left the train station.

Tom noticed the bag. Opening? the bag, they found ,to their surprise, that I was full of cash in bundles. They had only seen criminals do that making illegal deals on TV。

At the train station , our hasty customer was panic-stricken. His face covered with sweat, he tried very hard to recall where he had left his bag of money.

Finally he traced back to Mary’s? noodle restaurant. The minute be stepped in, he saw cops awaiting him at the counter. Damn ,He turned around to run, but it was too late. The cops arrested him, Now he had to think of a very good reason to explain what the money was for.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇看圖寫作，有三幅連環(huán)圖片，并要求想象第四幅圖片可能的發(fā)展，寫出一個(gè)涵蓋連環(huán)圖片內(nèi)容并有完整結(jié)局的故事。1. 認(rèn)真讀圖，2. 初步構(gòu)思，考慮用詞、短語、句型和時(shí)態(tài)。3. 連詞成句，然后再連句成文。盡可能地充分利用所學(xué)的短語或句型來表述具體的內(nèi)容。4. 反復(fù)審核，修改錯(cuò)誤。5. 注意所給的漢語提示。一般說來，看圖寫話中的漢語提示往往給定了有關(guān)的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物等相關(guān)的信息，還有參考詞匯都是有用信息。在把握了文章的中心后，應(yīng)在內(nèi)心構(gòu)思一個(gè)基本的框架，并考慮使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~語、短語和句型，以充分地表達(dá)文章的內(nèi)容。這是體現(xiàn)自身能力的重要一環(huán)。然后再將各圖的單個(gè)句子串連起來。串連時(shí)，要注意使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞語或過渡性語句，不至于讓讀者覺得文章中出現(xiàn)跳躍現(xiàn)象，更使上下文更為緊湊、自然。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，in a hurry匆忙的，turn around轉(zhuǎn)身， Opening? the bag, they found ,to their surprise, that I was full of cash in bundles. 這句話用了現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語， His face covered with sweat, he tried very hard to recall where he had left his bag of money.這句話用了獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)和賓語從句， The minute be stepped in, he saw cops awaiting him at the counter. 這句話用了the minute做連詞， Now he had to think of a very good reason to explain what the money was for.這句話用了賓語從句。

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