Question

假如你是李華，是你校愛(ài)心俱樂(lè)部（the Loving Heart Club）的成員。最近，你校學(xué)生會(huì)擬招聘五名英語(yǔ)志愿者教師，你對(duì)此很感興趣。現(xiàn)請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一封申請(qǐng)信，向?qū)W生會(huì)申請(qǐng)這份工作。

1. 寫(xiě)信目的；

2. 自我簡(jiǎn)介；

3. 你的競(jìng)聘優(yōu)勢(shì)；

4. 你對(duì)這份工作的認(rèn)識(shí)。

注意：

1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、地名等信息；

2. 詞數(shù)：100左右（書(shū)信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。

Dear the Students’ Union,

                                                                                            

                                                                                            

                                                                                            

                                                                                            

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear the Students’ Union,

I have learnt that you need five volunteer English teachers. I’d like to be one of them, so I’m writing to apply for the job.

My name is Li Hua, a member of the Loving Heart Club in our school, and I have a good command of English. I think I’m fit for the job well, because I have worked as an English tutor before, which will help me do the job better.

As far as I’m concerned, being a volunteer teacher is helpful to improve my understanding of the world. Besides, by helping others, I can make a small contribution to society.

I’d appreciate it if you could possibly consider my application. I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

                                                                             Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：題目要求用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一封申請(qǐng)信，申請(qǐng)成為一名英語(yǔ)志愿者老師。是常見(jiàn)的書(shū)信作文，寫(xiě)作的要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出，按要求從寫(xiě)信目的，自我介紹與自我優(yōu)勢(shì)，對(duì)工作的認(rèn)識(shí)等方面著手。用第一人稱(chēng)進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作，對(duì)自己的評(píng)價(jià)盡量客觀。注意書(shū)信的格式，標(biāo)點(diǎn)和書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文注意使用As far as I’m concerned, Besides,來(lái)銜接段意和句意，做到了語(yǔ)意連貫。范文使用了一些重點(diǎn)語(yǔ)法知識(shí)，如：賓語(yǔ)從句that you need five volunteer English teachers，原因狀語(yǔ)從句because I have worked...，非限制性定語(yǔ)從句which will help me do the job better，固定句型I’d appreciate it if...，動(dòng)名詞作主語(yǔ)being a volunteer teacher is...等；語(yǔ)法功底較扎實(shí)。范文還使用了較多的短語(yǔ)I’d like to, apply for, have a good command of, be fit for, As far as I’m concerned, by helping others, make a contribution to, look forward to等，使作文顯得充實(shí)，有內(nèi)涵。

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