Question

【題目】Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

俗話說“萬事開頭難”（All things are difficult before they are easy.）。你是否同意這一說法？請用英語寫一篇短文，內(nèi)容包括：

1. 你對這句俗語的理解；

2. 結(jié)合生活中一個具體事例加以說明。

注意：請勿透露本人真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

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Answer 1

【答案】 As the saying goes, all things are difficult before they are easy. As long as we succeed in the most difficult beginning, the road ahead will be much smoother.

Ma Yun, the creator of Alibaba, is actually not smooth in his life. He even took the college entrance exam three times before stepping into the gate of the university However, he has the spirit of perseverance and courage, survived the difficulties at the beginning of his life, and finally achieved success through his own efforts.

Helen Keller was blind and deaf when she was young, but she didn’t give up. And chose a difficult beginning. With the help of her teacher, she studied Braille. With her perseverance, she changed herself from a little girl who was pitiful and unknown to a strong woman who was respected by the world.

It was perseverance and the faith of never giving up that made them successful, because they believe that as long as they can get through that difficult beginning, they are sure to succeed!

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)是開放性作文，要求表達(dá)對一句俗語的理解并加以說明。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本文要求表達(dá)對一句俗語的理解并加以說明：俗話說“萬事開頭難”（All things are difficult before they are easy.）。你是否同意這一說法？請用英語寫一篇短文，內(nèi)容包括：1. 你對這句俗語的理解；2. 結(jié)合生活中一個具體事例加以說明。時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如； succeed（成功），smooth（平坦的），faith（信念），perseverance（堅持不懈），pitiful（可憐的），courage（勇氣）及effort（努力）等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持卷面的整潔美觀。