16．文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩延．每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分．
Chengdu is a famous city with long history．Locating in the southwest of China，it is the capital city of Sichuan Province，it is called"the Land of Abundance"．It is said that Chengdu got its name over 2000 years ago and it had never changed since then．There are a large number of famous cultural sites and delicious snacks here，which have always been attraction to tourists from around the world．Tourists come not only see the historical sites and taste the snacks，but also because that it has beautiful scenery．A walk in the side of the beautiful Jinjiang River will offer a feast for anyone's eyes．In a word，Chengdu，as a famous saying went，is a city that you mustn't leave once you have come．

分析 本文主要介紹了歷史文化名城：成都．它有二千多年的歷史，有許多著名的文化遺址和美味的快餐，還有美麗的風景．

解答 Chengdu is a famous city with∧long history．Locating in the southwest of China，it is the capital city of Sichuan Province，it is called"the Land of Abundance"．It is said that Chengdu got its name over 2000 years ago and it had never changed since then．There are a large number of famous cultural sites and delicious snacks here，which have always been attraction to tourists from around the world．Tourists come not only∧see the historical sites and taste the snacks，but also because that it has beautiful scenery．A walk in the side of the beautiful Jinjiang River will offer a feast for anyone's eyes．In a word，Chengdu，as a famous saying went，is a city that you mustn't eave once you have come．
詳解：
1．加a 考查冠詞．history意為"歷史"，是不可數(shù)名詞，但有形容詞修飾時要帶不定冠詞a，構成短語：with a long history意為"有著悠久的歷史"．
2．Locating改為Located 考查過去分詞．Locate是及物動詞，意為"使…坐落于"，be located in意為"…坐落于"，是常用短語．
3．it改為which 考查定語從句．分析句子結構可知這是一個定語從句，先行詞Sichuan Province在從句中作主語，用關系代詞which．
4．had改為has 考查動詞時態(tài)．根據(jù)句中時間狀語since then，用現(xiàn)在完成時．
5．a(chǎn)ttraction改為attracive 考查形容詞．be attractive to sb．意為"對…有吸引力"，是固定搭配．
6．加to 考查動詞不定式．此處動詞不定式表示目的，作目的狀語．
7．去掉that 考查連詞．本句中because 是連詞，意為"因為"，不再需要連詞了，that是多余的，要去掉．
8．in改為along 考查介詞．本句表示的是沿著金江河散步，in意為"在…里"，along意為"沿著"，用along．
9．went改為goes 考查動詞時態(tài)．"正如一個著名的諺語所說"用英語表達是：as a famous saying goes．
10．that改為where 考查定語從句．分析句子結構可知這是一個定語從句，先行詞city在從句中作地點狀語，用關系副詞where．

點評 高考短文改錯題的形式有說明文，短文故事，書信等，具有很強的實用性．短文的內(nèi)容和語言都符合高中學生的實際，從表面上看類似一篇學生習作．首先，通讀全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的時態(tài)、人稱及行文邏輯，在通讀全文時把一些容易的錯誤先改好，再進行逐句改錯．其次，要進行逐個句子的改錯．這是要對文中的詞法、句法和語篇著重分析和特別注意．最后把改好的短文再閱讀一遍，檢查答案是否正確，感覺是否還有不妥之處，最終形成定稿．

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