Question

 假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(A) ，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(\) 劃掉。修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：i.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起) ，不計(jì)分。

The longdesired winter vacation was arrived in the end. As soon as the bell rang,announced the end of the class,we couldn't wait to rush out of the class?room. Half an hour late,my good friend Li Ming and I were on the way back home. Such crowded was the train we took that they had to stand. Thinking of the coming Spring Festival and the twoweeks stay with parents,we both felt exciting. All of a sudden,I saw a man picking an old lady's pocket. With help of Li Ming,I caught the thief and force him to give back the purse to the lady. The thief was taken away by the guard. Praised by other passengers,we felt proud on what we had done.

Answer 1

The longdesired winter vacation was arrived in the end. As soon as the bell rang,announced the end of the class,we announcing couldn't wait to rush out of the classroom.  Half an hour late,later my good friend Li Ming and I were on the way back home. Such crowded was the train we took that they had to stand. Thinking we of the coming Spring Festival and the twoweeks stay with par-two-week ents,we both felt exciting. All of a sudden,I saw a man picking excited an old lady's pocket. With A help of Li Ming,I caught the thief the and force him to give back the purse to the lady. The thief was forced taken away by the guard. Praised by other passengers,we felt proud on what we had done.