Question

假設你是James，你的加拿大筆友Jessie想了解一下你將要參加的2013年全國中學生英語冬令營(English Winter Camp)的有關信息。請你根據(jù)下面的海報給她寫一封信，談談有關情況和活動意義，并邀請她參加你們的活動。
活動營址：山東濟南
活動時間：2013年12月底，共4天
參加人員：來自全國各地的英語愛好者；中、美、英、澳四國的英語老師
活動內(nèi)容：舉行英語演講比賽，交流學習英語的經(jīng)驗，
觀看學生文藝表演，游覽濟南風景名勝等。
注意：1. 書信必須包括以上提供的內(nèi)容要點，可以適當增加細節(jié)，使內(nèi)容連貫；
2. 詞數(shù)：100詞左右。
Dear Jessie,
Nice to hear from you again!
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Best wishes!
Yours truly,
James

Answer 1

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Dear Jessie,
Nice to hear from you again!
As you know, I’m going to spend this winter vacation in a four-day English Winter Camp to be held in Jinan at the end of December, 2013. Many other English lovers from high schools all over the country will go to the Camp as well. Some English teachers from China, England, Australia and the USA will also join us.
In the camp, we will have some English speaking competition, watch some wonderful performances given by the students, and, of course, visit some great places of interest in Jinan. Besides, we will exchange our English learning experience and talk about our colorful school life in English.
I think this winter camp would greatly improve my spoken English and I would make some new friends there. I do hope you will come and join us for the grand occasion.
Best wishes!
Yours truly,
James

試題分析：考生應該依據(jù)文章提示準確定位人稱。在人稱、時態(tài)準確定位以后，考生應將重點放在文章的遣詞造句上。尤其是內(nèi)容要點要把握準確到位，這是半開放性作文，要點需要考生拿捏準確，這加大了寫作難度。再者考生要注意盡可能使句子的表達形式多樣化，適當?shù)氖褂靡恍└呒壘涫胶透呒壴~匯，以提高書面表達的檔次和可讀性。
點評：應該注意適當增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫，比如適當選用表示因果、遞進、轉(zhuǎn)折關系的連接詞，使文章流暢、通順，并避免因反復使用句式相同的簡單句而造成的單調(diào)感。動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作練習以外，還可以適當背誦一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。