Question

12．假如你是李明，最近你的朋友張華因考試不利，情緒低落，學(xué)習(xí)消極應(yīng)付．請(qǐng)你用英語給他寫一封e-mail 勸慰他，鼓勵(lì)他努力學(xué)習(xí)，并結(jié)合自身實(shí)際，提出應(yīng)采取的積極態(tài)度和應(yīng)對(duì)方法．
字?jǐn)?shù)：120左右
Dear Zhang Hua，
I'm sorry to hear that
                                                                       
Yours，
Li ming．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇開放類作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料信息，給朋友張華寫一封e-mail．指出其情緒低落，學(xué)習(xí)消極應(yīng)付的消極行為可能帶來不良后果，并提出應(yīng)采取的積極態(tài)度和應(yīng)對(duì)方法，鼓勵(lì)他努力學(xué)習(xí)．
寫作時(shí)人稱以第一和第二人稱為主，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主．
寫作要點(diǎn)：1．開頭-問候； 2．告知比賽相關(guān)事宜：比賽時(shí)間；報(bào)名時(shí)間；報(bào)名地點(diǎn)；參賽內(nèi)容；獲獎(jiǎng)辦法；3．結(jié)尾．
重要短語：do well in（做得好），try one's best （盡某人最大的努力），end up with a failure（以失敗而告終），tend to do （有做某事的傾向），lose one's confidence（失去信心），be left far behind（被落下），in face of（面臨），calme down（鎮(zhèn)定，冷靜），ask sb for advice（向某人尋求幫助），stick to（堅(jiān)持），step by step（逐步地），be of some help to sb（對(duì)某人有幫助）．
【高分句型一】
1．You are not the only one who seems to try his best but end up with a failure in exams．
此處是由關(guān)系代詞"who"引導(dǎo)的定語從句，先行詞為"the only one"，關(guān)系代詞"who"在定語從句中做主語．
【高分句型二】
2．In face of failure，①what we need to do is ②to calme down and reflect our learning methods and make some possible changes or to ask the teachers for advice．
①此處是由"what"引導(dǎo)的主語從句，"what"在主語從句中作"賓語"．
②此處是由"and"連接的幾個(gè)并列的不定式作表語．
【高分句型三】
3．Only by sticking to studying persistently can we make progress step by step till success．
此處是部分倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)，結(jié)構(gòu)為"Only+【狀語成分：介詞短語/when、if引導(dǎo)的從句/時(shí)間副詞】+一般疑問句形式"．

解答 Dear Zhang Hua，
     I'm sorry to hear that you didn't do well in your last exam．You are not the only one who
seems to try his best but end up with a failure in exams．【高分句型一】Quite a number of students feel the same way as you and they tend to lose their confidence and don't want to study hard any longer．I'm sure you know that it's unwise to do so because you might be left far behind．（消極行為可能帶來不良后果）
     I was once in the same situation as yours．Failure is the mother of success．In face of failure，what we need to do is to calme down and reflect our learning methods and make some possible changes or to ask the teachers for advice．【高分句型二】（應(yīng)采取的積極態(tài)度和應(yīng)對(duì)方法）
     Anyway，Rome is not built a day．Only by sticking to studying persistently can we make progress step by step till success．【高分句型三】I truly hope I can be of some help to you．（結(jié)尾）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．