Question

【題目】假設你是李華，5月1日你和同學參觀了北京大學。請根據下圖，用英語寫一篇日記。

注意：

1. 詞數100左右；

2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3. 開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。

It's a fine day today and

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Answer 1

【答案】May 1 Monday Fine

It's a fine day today and we paid a visit to Beijing University. Early in the morning, we arrived at the gate where a professor gave us a warm welcome. We were then shown around.

We first went to the library with a large collection of books, where we saw students reading attentively. Next students sitting under trees, studying, which made a beautiful picture. At about 4 in the afternoon. We attended a lecture on science given by a famous professor. Before we knew it, it was time to say goodbye.

Now sitting at the table I feel very excited. I will make every effort to go to college.

【解析】試題分析：本次作文要求請根據下圖，用英語寫一篇日記，這種題型較難。首先要仔細觀察圖片內容，確定寫作內容；其次要寫出每個圖的要點，再對內容加以充實；最后要審視全文，把握好文章主題，結尾點題。寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)（本文是日記，多用一般過去時態(tài)），上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要富有變化。要注意書寫，認真查驗是否有漏寫情況等。

寫作亮點：本篇條理清楚，要點全面，結構連貫。其句式上的變化既使得文章生動而流暢，也體現(xiàn)了作者駕馭句式的能力。例如：文章運用了定語從句where we saw students reading attentively和which made a beautiful picture等；還有詞組paid a visit to和make every effort都用得十分恰當。