Question

10．利用提示寫出介紹自己的句子．
a．my name is b．I was born in c．My father worked as d．I studied e．I studied at
f．I am g．I live in h．I am currently working on i．In my spare time I like
j．At the weekends I often．

Answer 1

分析 本文為半開(kāi)放性寫作．要求來(lái)介紹自己．提示雖然清晰，但需要讀者繼續(xù)擴(kuò)展，寫作內(nèi)容包括：我的姓名，出生地，父親的工作，我的主修科目及地點(diǎn)，我的居住地，最近在做什么，我的課余愛(ài)好，周末常做的事情．注意要豐富文章內(nèi)容．審題時(shí)注意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱使用一人稱．
重要短語(yǔ)：
cultivate my taste 提升我的品味，well known 有名的，enormous impact 巨大的影響．
高分句子：
1．I am sure that reading some elegant sentence or the beautiful things described in the book will make us feel relax and comfortable．本句整體為that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句，從句中又含有以some elegant sentence or the beautiful things described in the book 做主語(yǔ)的主語(yǔ)從句．
2．Despite what many might think，English movies is well known across hundreds of nations all over the world．本句為Despite引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語(yǔ)從句從句．
3．It would be safe to assume that English Movies is going to be around for a long time and have an enormous impact on the lives of many people．本句中含有重要句式，It would be safe to assume that，可以正確地總結(jié)．

解答 My name is Tom and I was born in England．I am  21 years old now．My father worked as an English teacher．I studied literature in Machester university．I am currently working on Chinese ancient literature，for Reading can cultivate my taste．I am sure that reading some elegant sentence or the beautiful things described in the book will make us feel relax and comfortable．（高分句型）In my spare time I like reading，swimming and dancing with my friends．At the weekends I often go to cinema with my family．Despite what many might think，English movies is well known across hundreds of nations all over the world．In my opinion，some excellent movies has been around for several centuries and has a very important meaning in the lives of many．It would be safe to assume that English Movies is going to be around for a long time and have an enormous impact on the lives of many people．（高分句型）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本篇文章已經(jīng)給出了提示的自我介紹的句型，而僅僅憑借這些寫作是不夠的，一是句型簡(jiǎn)單，太過(guò)單一，二是內(nèi)容不豐富，字?jǐn)?shù)也不夠．因此考生需要找準(zhǔn)自己能夠發(fā)揮的點(diǎn)，例如，我的愛(ài)好，或者我的工作環(huán)境，我常做的事等等，來(lái)進(jìn)行補(bǔ)充，擴(kuò)寫．在擴(kuò)寫中應(yīng)用上高水平的句型以及詞匯詞組，來(lái)增加作文亮點(diǎn)，使作文脫穎而出．