【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（﹨）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

During the National Day holiday, my parents and I paid a visit my grandparents by train. There was a large number of people and the train was crowded, but everyone helped those who had lots of baggages and behaved politely. Along the way, we enjoyed beautifully views. At the first, we saw one hill after another. Then what came into view were fields with green crops. After a six-hour trip, they arrived at our grandparents’ house. Exhausted although I felt, I was happy to see my grandparents, which I hadn’t seen for a long time. It’s really an excited trip because it was the first time that I had taken so a long-distance train.

【答案】1.paid 后添加to

2.was→were

3.baggages→baggage

4. beautifully →beautiful

5.At the first中去掉the

6. they→we

7. although→though/as

8.which→who/whom

9.excited→exciting

10.so→such

【解析】

這是一篇記敘文。本文主要講述作者和父母乘火車去看望祖父母，一路上看到了許多美景，雖然累，但這是作者第一次乘這么遠(yuǎn)的火車。

1.考查介詞。根據(jù)短語(yǔ)pay a visit to意為“參觀，拜訪”。故paid后添加to。

2.考查主謂一致。there be句型中，be動(dòng)詞的人稱和數(shù)與be后的主語(yǔ)保持一致，此處主語(yǔ)是a large number of people，謂語(yǔ)用復(fù)數(shù)。故was改為were。

3.考查名詞。baggage是不可數(shù)名詞，沒(méi)有復(fù)數(shù)形式。故baggages改為baggage。

4.考查形容詞。views是名詞，要用形容詞beautiful修飾，表示“美麗的”。故beautifully 改為beautiful。

5.考查冠詞。根據(jù)短語(yǔ)at first表示“首先”，中間不需要冠詞。故At the first中去掉the。

6.考查代詞。句意：經(jīng)過(guò)6個(gè)小時(shí)的旅行，我們到達(dá)了祖父母家。此處表示“我們”做主語(yǔ)應(yīng)用代詞we。故they改為we。

7.考查讓步狀語(yǔ)從句。句意：雖然我很累，但我很高興看到我很久沒(méi)見(jiàn)過(guò)的祖父母。此句使用了不完全倒裝形式，although引導(dǎo)讓步狀語(yǔ)時(shí)不需倒裝，不能將句子成分提前。as引導(dǎo)讓步狀語(yǔ)從句必須倒裝，though可倒可不倒。故although改為though/as。

8.考查定語(yǔ)從句。此處為非限定性定語(yǔ)從句修飾先行詞grandfather，指人，不能用which，先行詞在從句中做賓語(yǔ)，應(yīng)用關(guān)系代詞who/whom引導(dǎo)。故which改為who/whom。

9.考查形容詞。此處修飾名詞trip，應(yīng)用-ing結(jié)尾形容詞，表示“令人激動(dòng)的旅行”。故excited改為exciting。

10.考查形容詞。such修飾名詞，so修飾形容詞，train為名詞。故so改為such。

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