Question

假設(shè)你是重慶朝陽中學(xué)學(xué)生劉洋，得知2013年香港大學(xué)要在大陸進(jìn)行自主招生的消息后非常的高興，你有意向香港大學(xué)申請，參加自主招生考試。請根據(jù)表格信息，用英語寫一封自薦信。

個人信息	男，16歲，高三學(xué)生
性格和潛質(zhì)	開朗，喜歡與人交往； 有良好的團(tuán)隊精神； 適應(yīng)能力強(qiáng)。
學(xué)習(xí)與獲獎情況	學(xué)習(xí)刻苦，成績名列前茅； 曾獲“希望英語”英語演講全國一等獎。
個人愛好與特長	……

注意：1) 詞數(shù)100左右；
2) 信的開頭與結(jié)尾以為你寫好（不計入總詞匯）。
3）可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫。
4) 參考詞匯：
自主招生independent recruitment
英語演講比賽 English Speech contest
團(tuán)隊精神 teamwork
Dear Sir,
My name is Liu Yang, from Zhao Yang High School in Chongqing.
Yours Sincerely,     
Liu Yang

Answer 1

Dear Sir,
My name is Liu Yang, from Zhao Yang High School in Chongqing. I am more than glad when I get the news that Hong Kong University will have independent recruitment in mainland. I would like to apply for admission for taking part in the independent recruitment exams of your school.
I am a sixteen-year-old boy, who is studying in Senior 3. I am sociable, easy-going and good at communicating with others. I have made many friends and I can do well in a team. Meanwhile, I am quite independent and it is easy for me to adapt to a new environment. My hobbies are playing basketball and football. I am also good at playing the violin.
As a senior student, I have been working hard at my lessons and managed to get high grades. I am especially good at English, who have won the first prize in an English Speech Contest of Hope English. All this will enable me to continue my study in your university without having much trouble with a language barrier.
I should be grateful if you can take my application into consideration.
Looking forward to your early reply.  
Yours sincerely,
LiuYang

試題分析：這是提綱式作文：要點以表格形式給出，要點比較全，因此考生只需要根據(jù)所給提綱，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡潔。按順序安排好材料。使用靈活多變的句式表達(dá)要點，不要遺漏，同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。考生必須認(rèn)真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等
【亮點說明】I am more than glad when I get the news that Hong Kong University will have independent recruitment in mainland.這句話用了同位語從句 ，I am a sixteen-year-old boy, who is studying in Senior 3. 這句話用了非限制性定語從句，. I am quite independent and it is easy for me to adapt to a new environment.這句話用了it做形式主語， I am especially good at English, who have won the first prize in an English Speech Contest of Hope English. 這句話也是用了定語從句，All this will enable me to continue my study in your university without having much trouble with a language barrier.這句話用了動名詞。   I should be grateful if you can take my application into consideration. 這句話用了take sth into consideration。還有文章還用了Meanwhile, 這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞使文章更加連貫。