Question

【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

Several years before, my friend and I drove to Chicago to pay a visit our other friends. We noticed that there was a homeless man sitting at an exit of the subway. So we bought some food and gave them to him. When he saw what we have bought for him, he became exciting with joy. After seeing his reaction, my friend and I decided to help more people. One night we packed up sandwiches or bottles of water, looking for people whom were in need. When I saw the look of joy in the face of each person we helped, I was very pleased. It was one of the most amazing feeling in my life.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】before → ago

【2】visit后加to

【3】an → the

【4】them → it

【5】have → had

【6】exciting→ excited

【7】or → and

【8】whom → who

【9】in→ on

【10】feeling→ feelings

【解析】

試題分析：通過(guò)短文，考查學(xué)生對(duì)固定搭配，動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)和語(yǔ)態(tài)，名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)問(wèn)題等。

【1】before → ago 考查連詞。多少年以前用ago而不是before。

【2】visit后加to 考查動(dòng)詞。Pay a visit to sb拜訪某人，為固定搭配。

【3】an → the 考查冠詞。在這里地鐵出口是特指，所以需用冠詞the。

【4】them → it考查代詞。這里it指代的是前面的food，為不可數(shù)名詞，所以需用單數(shù)形式it指代。

【5】 have→ had�？疾闀r(shí)態(tài)。這里需用過(guò)去完成時(shí)had done。

【6】exciting→ excited 考查形容詞。be excited with對(duì)……很興奮，exciting修飾物，excited修飾人。

【7】or → and 考查連詞。這里Sandwiches和water是并列關(guān)系，or表示選擇關(guān)系，and表示順承，并列關(guān)系。

【8】whom → who 考查關(guān)系代詞。Whom在定語(yǔ)從句中做賓語(yǔ)，who在定語(yǔ)從句中做主語(yǔ)，該句缺少主語(yǔ)。

【9】in → on考查介詞的時(shí)態(tài)。On the face of面對(duì)，為固定短語(yǔ)。

【10】feeling → feelings 考查名詞復(fù)數(shù)。One of +復(fù)數(shù)名詞，所以這里需用復(fù)數(shù)。