假如英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同學(xué)們交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10

處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤， 要求你在錯(cuò)誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個(gè)單詞。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），在其下面寫(xiě)上該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)上修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞。

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從11處起）不記分。

Dear Susan,

I'm very glad to hear you are coming to visit me the next Friday. Unfortunate, I won't be able

to meet you at the airport as I had classes in the afternoon. Therefore, you won't find difficult

to get to the city center. The airport bus leaves every 30 minute and will take us right to the

Friendship Hotel. My classes will be over by then or I will pick you up there. I will take you

to a hot pot restaurant for dinner and we'll talk with our plan for the weekend over dinner.

Having a pleasant trip and see you Friday.

Yours,

Zhang Ming

1.刪去the

2.Unfortunate—Unfortunately

3.had—have

4.Therefore—However

5.find + it

6.minute—minutes

7.us—you

8.or—and

9.with—about

10.Having—have

【解析】

試題分析：

1. 短語(yǔ)next Friday單獨(dú)在句中做時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)，不需要在前面加上the。

2. 應(yīng)該使用副詞unfortunately在句中作狀語(yǔ)修飾整個(gè)句子。

3. 本文的基本時(shí)態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，所以使用have而不是had。

4. 上下文之間存在著轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系而不是因果關(guān)系，雖然我不能去接你，但是你也不會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)很困難。

5. + it 本句的it是一個(gè)形式賓語(yǔ)，真正的賓語(yǔ)是后面的不定式to get to the city center,形容詞difficult在句中是賓語(yǔ)補(bǔ)足語(yǔ)。

6. 前面有數(shù)詞30修飾，說(shuō)明后面要使用的是可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)形式。

7. 機(jī)場(chǎng)大巴每30分鐘出發(fā)一次，將會(huì)把你帶到友誼賓館。根據(jù)句意可知take的賓語(yǔ)應(yīng)該是you，而不是us。

8. 句意：我的課那時(shí)就會(huì)結(jié)束了，我去那里接你。上下文之間是順接關(guān)系，而不是選擇關(guān)系。

9. 固定搭配talk about sth談?wù)撃呈�，talk with sb與某人交談。句意：我會(huì)和你談?wù)撐覀兊闹苣┯?jì)劃。

10. 本句是一個(gè)祈使句，句意：玩得開(kāi)心點(diǎn)，周五見(jiàn)。這里的Have a pleasant trip和see you Friday是并列關(guān)系。

考點(diǎn)：短文改錯(cuò)

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