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15．高二階段學習比較緊張，正確的學習方法尤為重要．下表顯示了兩位同學不同的學習方法，請簡述并發(fā)表你的觀點． 字數(shù)在100-120之間．文章開頭已經(jīng)給出．

學習方法	李華	王海	你的觀點
白天	上課專心聽講，盡可能經(jīng)常老 師請教疑難問題．	上課打瞌睡，漏掉了許多要點．
晚上	花較少時間完成作業(yè)，早點休息，上課經(jīng)常保持旺盛的精力	花較多的時間完成作業(yè)，熬夜學習，導致注意力無法集中．

Possible version 1：
Li Hua and Wang Hai are two students of Senior Two．Both of them work hard but they have different learning methods．Li Hua listens to her teachers attentively，tries to catch everything that the teachers say in class and consults her teachers as often as possible if she has some problems．（高分句型一）Because of this，she spends less time doing her homework，so it is certain that she can go to bed earlier and she always keeps energetic in the day．
However，Wang Hai has quite a different way of learning．He likes to sit up late at night doing his homework，so he often feels sleepy in class．As a result，he misses lots of key points and it usually takes him more time to finish his homework，which makes it difficult for him to concentrate on what he is doing．（高分句型二）
In my opinion，Li Hua learns more effectively in class and has more free time to enjoy herself．So I prefer her learning method．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇敘述性地議論文寫作．依據(jù)表格所提供的信息，先根據(jù)提示表述李華和王海的學習方法，然后再發(fā)表自己的關于學習方法的觀點．要求：詞數(shù)：100～120，短文的開頭和結尾已寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)．且短文需包括表中所有要點，內容可適當發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫．
【亮點說明】范文用了一些高級的句型，使得文章水平在一個高的層面，如：tries to catch everything that the teachers say in class and consults her teachers as often as possible if she has some problems．定語從句；it is certain that she can go to bed earlier and she always keeps energetic in the day．it 固定句式；it usually takes him more time to finish his homework，which makes it difficult for him to concentrate on what he is doing．非限制性定語從句．還采用了一些比較好的短語：as often as possible，sit up late，In my opinion等，同樣有一些好的銜接詞，使得文章讀起來通順，有序：However，．As a result，

解答 Li Hua and Wang Hai are two students of Senior Two．Both of them work hard but they have different learning methods．Li Hua listens to her teachers attentively，tries to catch everything that the teachers say in class and consults her teachers as often as possible if she has some problems．（高分句型一）Because of this，she spends less time doing her homework，so it is certain that she can go to bed earlier and she always keeps energetic in the day．
     However，Wang Hai has quite a different way of learning．He likes to sit up late at night doing his homework，so he often feels sleepy in class．As a result，he misses lots of key points and it usually takes him more time to finish his homework，which makes it difficult for him to concentrate on what he is doing．（高分句型二）    
     In my opinion，Li Hua learns more effectively in class and has more free time to enjoy herself．So I prefer her learning method．

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．