Question

【題目】最近我市政府決定建設(shè)高速鐵路，圍繞這個話題。你班進行了一次討論。

70%的同學(xué)支持這項計劃，理由：

1）方便市民出行，減少城市交通堵塞 2）有效地控制城市空氣污染

30%的同學(xué)反對，理由：

1）造價太高 2）工期太長，影響市民生活。

陳述自己的立場，觀點。開頭已給，不列入詞數(shù)。（100詞左右）

Recently our class had a discussion about whether the high-speed railway should be built in our city. The results are as follows.__________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

Recently our class had a discussion about whether the high-speed railway should be built in our city. The results are as follows.

70% of the students argue for constructing the high-speed railway, saying that not only is it convenient for the citizens to get around, but it will to some degree relieve the serious situation of traffic. Meanwhile, air pollution in the urban area will be lessened as well.

Nevertheless, the rest 30% believe that it will cost too large amounts of money while the reward may be far from satisfactory. Worse still, the construction will cover a long period of time, which will have side effects on our daily lives.

As far as I am concerned, I’m in favor of the former. Much as it could cost, it is of great benefit to us in the long run.

【解析】

試題分析：最近我市政府決定建設(shè)高速鐵路，圍繞這個話題。你班進行了一次討論。70%的同學(xué)支持這項計劃，理由：1）方便市民出行，減少城市交通堵塞 2）有效地控制城市空氣污染

30%的同學(xué)反對，理由：1）造價太高2）工期太長，影響市民生活。陳述自己的立場，觀點。開頭已給，不列入詞數(shù)。（100詞左右）寫作時不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫同時要把所提示的點寫全，語句通順，同時要注意準確運用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。根據(jù)句意適當(dāng)使用并列連詞，同時也要合理運用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩。

【亮點說明】本文內(nèi)容齊全，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴謹，層次分明，布局合理，語言精練，同時運用高級句子。現(xiàn)在分詞做伴隨狀語：70% of the students argue for constructing the high-speed railway, saying that not only is it convenient for the citizens to get around,賓語從句和讓步狀語從句的同時使用非常精彩：the rest 30% believe that it will cost too large amounts of money while the reward may be far from satisfactory.非限制性定語從句的使用：the construction will cover a long period of time, which will have side effects on our daily lives.連接詞的使用非常合理到位：but；Meanwhile；Nevertheless；Worse still；As far as I am concerned。