Question

【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下短文。短文中共有10處錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在此符號(hào)下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Great changes have taken place in the way of communication in people's life in recent years.

In the past, people kept in touch with each other mainly by written letters or using the public telephone. But now almost everyone have his own mobile phone. People can communicate for each other almost at any place and at any time. What's more, people have easy access to the Internet, what enables them to send and receive e-mails whatever they like.

With this changes, people's pace of life has been quickened and people's work has been made more efficiently. It is used to take several days to hear of each other, but now it takes only several minutes, even if they are on two different continents. In word, people have an easier life nowadays.

Answer 1

【答案】1.written改為writing

2.have改為has

3.for為with

4.what改為which

5.whatever改為whenever

6.this改為these

7.efficiently改為efficient

8.去掉is

9.of改為from

10.word前加a

【解析】本文是一篇說(shuō)明文。主要講述了當(dāng)今社會(huì)，人們溝通交流的方式發(fā)生了很大的變化，從過(guò)去的書(shū)信、公用電話到現(xiàn)在的互聯(lián)網(wǎng)、私人手機(jī)，人們之間的溝通變得越來(lái)越容易，工作也越來(lái)越有效率。

第一處：根據(jù)“mainly by written letters or using the public telephone”，by為介詞，后面應(yīng)該加動(dòng)名詞，故將written改為writing。

第二處：根據(jù)“everyone have his own mobile phone”，主語(yǔ)everyone表示單數(shù)形式的代詞，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞應(yīng)該與之相對(duì)應(yīng)使用三單形式，故將have改為has。

第三處：“People can communicate for each other”，communicate with sb.與某人交流，為固定搭配，故將for改為with。

第四處：“people have easy access to the Internet, what enables them to send and receive e-mails whatever they like”，根據(jù)關(guān)系詞是要代指前面整句話的內(nèi)容，將what改為which，what不能引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句。

第五處：“enables them to send and receive e-mails whatever they like”，句子send and receive e-mails收發(fā)郵件，表示的是在某一時(shí)間進(jìn)行的動(dòng)作，結(jié)合“People can communicate for each other almost at any place and at any time”，可知作者想表述的是，人們之間的交流不受時(shí)間的限制，任何時(shí)間都可以進(jìn)行交流，故將whatever改為whenever。

第六處：“With this changes”，change作為名詞表“變化”使用時(shí)，為可數(shù)名詞，根據(jù) changes使用復(fù)數(shù)，故將this改為these。

第七處：“people's work has been made more efficiently”，make+賓語(yǔ)+形容詞，形容詞作賓語(yǔ)補(bǔ)語(yǔ)，故將efficiently改為efficient。

第八處：“It is used to take several days to hear of each other”，used to do sth.表示“過(guò)去常常做某事”，本身就是一個(gè)動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)，可以用作謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞，故將is刪掉。

第九處：“It used to take several days to hear of each other”，hear from“收到……的來(lái)信”，為固定詞組。故將of 改為from。

第十處：“In word, people have an easier life nowadays”，in a word意為“總而言之”，為固定詞組。故在word前添加a。