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1．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)（^），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉． 修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞； 2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
It doesn't matter to fail as long as you don't give up．To my opinion，it is hard to be successful．Challenges were a necessary part of your life as you grow up．And you won't necessary succeed in everything for the first time you try．That's okay．Some of the most successful people in the world are the one who've had the most failures．J．K．Rowling，wrote Harry Potter，had her first Harry Potter book was rejected 12 times before it was finally published．Michael Jordan was removed his high school basketball team．He lost hundreds of games and miss thousands of shots during his career．But he once said，"I have failed over and over and over again in my life．And that's because I succeed．"

Answer 1

分析 本文敘述了挑戰(zhàn)是在我們?nèi)松�中必要的一部分．還列舉了杰克•羅琳的第一本《哈利波特》被拒絕了12次才出版的故事；邁克爾喬丹被從他的高中籃球隊(duì)裁下來，錯(cuò)失了很多進(jìn)球，終于成功了的故事．

解答 It doesn't matter to fail as long as you don't give up．To my opinion，it is hard to be successful．Challenges were a necessary part of your life as you grow up．And you won't necessary succeed in everything for the first time you try．That's okay．Some of the most successful people in the world are the one who've had the most failures．J．K．Rowling，∧wrote Harry Potter，had her first Harry Potter book was rejected 12 times before it was finally published．Michael Jordan was removed∧his high school basketball team．He lost hundreds of games and miss thousands of shots during his career．But he once said，"I have failed over and over and over again in my life．And that's because I succeed．"
詳解：
1．To改為In 考查介詞．in one's opinion 意為"依某人來看"，是固定搭配．
2．were改為are 考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)．根據(jù)時(shí)間狀語從句as you grow up，此處應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．
3．necessary改為necessarily 考查副詞．succeed是動(dòng)詞，要用副詞修飾．
4．去掉for 考查連詞．for the first time 意為"首次，第一次"，作獨(dú)立作狀語；the first time意為"第一次"，是連詞，后接從句，不能獨(dú)立使用．此處有從句 you try，故用連詞 the first time．因此去掉介詞for．
5．one改為ones 考查代詞．根據(jù)the one代指的是some of the most successful people一些成功的人，是復(fù)數(shù)，故此處應(yīng)用ones，即：世界上有一些最成功的人就是曾經(jīng)最失敗的人．
6．加who 考查定語從句．分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知這是一個(gè)定語從句，先行詞J．K．Rowling在從句中作主語，用關(guān)系代詞who．
7．去掉was 考查詞語用法．have sth．done意為"遭受"．根據(jù)句意：她的第一部《哈利•波特》被拒絕了12次．此處去掉動(dòng)詞was．
8．加from 考查介詞．根據(jù)句意：邁克爾喬丹被從他的高中籃球隊(duì)裁下來．remove from意為"從…中移開〔拿走，除掉〕"，此處應(yīng)加上介詞from
9．miss改為missed 考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)． and是并列連詞，它前后連接兩個(gè)相同的語法成分，前面的動(dòng)詞lost是一般過去時(shí)，此處也是一般過去時(shí)．
10．because改為why 考查連詞．根據(jù)句意：這就是我為什么成功了．用連詞why，此處是強(qiáng)調(diào)結(jié)果的表語從句，because用于強(qiáng)調(diào)原因．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 高考短文改錯(cuò)題的形式有說明文，短文故事，書信等，具有很強(qiáng)的實(shí)用性．短文的內(nèi)容和語言都符合高中學(xué)生的實(shí)際，從表面上看類似一篇學(xué)生習(xí)作．首先，通讀全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱及行文邏輯，在通讀全文時(shí)把一些容易的錯(cuò)誤先改好，再進(jìn)行逐句改錯(cuò)．其次，要進(jìn)行逐個(gè)句子的改錯(cuò)．這是要對(duì)文中的詞法、句法和語篇著重分析和特別注意．最后把改好的短文再閱讀一遍，檢查答案是否正確，感覺是否還有不妥之處，最終形成定稿．