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3．近來，越來越多的家長在學(xué)校附近租房陪讀．21世紀(jì)報(bào)"Your Opinions"欄目近期就"Should Our Parents Accompany Us in Studying at School？"進(jìn)行征文，請根據(jù)下面的要求寫一篇英語短文．內(nèi)容包括：
1．描述陪讀現(xiàn)象；
2．分析陪讀現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的原因
3．就陪讀現(xiàn)象作簡短的評論并給出你的建議．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100字左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Should Our Parents Accompany Us in Studying at School？
Dear editor，
                                            
That's all．Thank you!

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文，讓我們寫一篇關(guān)于越來越多的家長在學(xué)校附近租房陪讀的作文，這需要我們發(fā)揮英語思維，將提供的信息用英語完整流暢的表達(dá)出來．寫作需要用第三人稱，時(shí)態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：描述陪讀現(xiàn)象；分析陪讀現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的原因；就陪讀現(xiàn)象作簡短的評論并給出你的建議．我們此篇作文分為三部分，第一部分為描述陪讀現(xiàn)象．第二部分為分析陪讀現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的原因．第三部分為就陪讀現(xiàn)象作簡短的評論并給出你的建議．
重點(diǎn)短語與句型：
develop a habit of養(yǎng)成習(xí)慣…
 do harm to  對…有害
Apart form除…外
keep track of追蹤，跟蹤
高分句型一：About 70% of students hold the point of view that their parents shouldn't accompany them in studying at school．此句用了that引導(dǎo)同為語從句，修飾view，觀點(diǎn)的內(nèi)容
高分句型二：I think it necessary for parents to offer a better living condition to the kids．，which can allow them to keep track of the kids'academic performance．a(chǎn)nd get their kids into the habit of being dependent此句用了it作形式賓語以及非限制性定語從句

解答 Should our parents accompany us in studying at school？
Dear editor，
According to a recent survey about whether our parents should accompany us in studying at school，the students do have different opinions．（描述陪讀現(xiàn)象）
About 70% of students hold the point of view that their parents shouldn't accompany them in studying at school．The reasons are following．（高分句型一）Firstly，With accompaning of parents make them develop a habit of reling，which is do harm to the development of their good study habit and develop self-control ability．Then accompany in studying at school for their childern affects their work and rest．Apart form this，there are about 30% students consider their parernts should accompany their in studying at school．At first，with accompaning of thier parents make them have more time to study，make their body health much better．Futhermore，their parents can press them to finish study tasks，encouraging them to overcome difficulties．（分析陪讀現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的原因）
I think  it necessary for parents  to offer a better living condition to the kids．，which  can allow them to keep track of the kids'academic performance．a(chǎn)nd get their kids into the habit of being dependent（．高分句型二）Meanwhile，they will never develop the ability of self-control in the future．Parents should create room for children's growth and study，in order to ensure their overall development．（就陪讀現(xiàn)象作簡短的評論并給出你的建議）

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