Question

1．假如英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（/）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．Of all the books I have read，I like Oliver Twist best，it is written by British writer
 
Charles Dickens and reveal the darkness of London society druing 19th centruy．In
 
the novel，Oliver Twist was an orphan born in a town miles far away from London．
 
He was very poor，and when he escaped from London，he fell into the hands of a
 
group of thieves．They force him to steal．Oliver had suffered many pain before
 
being adopted by a kind man．In the end the thief got the punishment they deserved．
 
After reading the novel I am real moved by Oliver Twist's kindness．The novel has
 
taught myself that the kindness will defeat evil．

Answer 1

分析 我看過的所有書中，我最喜歡霧都孤兒．這是狄更斯寫的小說，反映了十九世紀(jì)倫敦社會(huì)的黑暗．奧利弗是一個(gè)出身在離倫敦?cái)?shù)里之外一個(gè)小鎮(zhèn)上的孤兒，當(dāng)他逃往倫敦時(shí)，落到了一群盜賊的手中，他們強(qiáng)迫他偷東西．經(jīng)歷了千辛萬苦之后，他被一位好心的老人收養(yǎng)．最終，盜賊受到了應(yīng)有的懲罰．這本小說教會(huì)了我善良終將戰(zhàn)勝邪惡．

解答 Of all the books I have read，I like Oliver Twist best，it is written by British writer 
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Charles Dickens and reveal the darkness of London society druing∧19th centruy．In 
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the novel，Oliver Twist was an orphan born in a town miles far away from London．
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He was very poor，and when he escaped from London，he fell into the hands of a
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group of thieves．They forcehim to steal．Oliver had suffered many pain before
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being adopted by a kind man．In the end the thief got the punishment they deserved．
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After reading the novel I am real moved by Oliver Twist's kindness．The novel has 
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taught myself that the kindness will defeat evil．
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1．it改為which．題干中有逗號(hào)分隔，要用連詞連接定語從句修飾Oliver Twist．
2．reveal改為reveals．句中的主語是Oliver Twist這本小說，介紹的是一般情況，謂語動(dòng)詞要用三單形式．
3．加the．題干在19th centruy是序數(shù)詞，要用定冠詞限定．
4．far去掉．題干中有miles表示距離，far way不能和具體的數(shù)量連用．
5．from改為to．邏輯錯(cuò)誤，句意表達(dá)的是他逃往倫敦，不是從倫敦逃走．
6．force改為forced．文章講述的是小說中的過去，要用一般過去時(shí)態(tài)．
7．many改為much．題干中pain是不可數(shù)名詞，不能用many修飾．
8．thief改為thieves．文章講述的是一群小偷，要用復(fù)數(shù)．
9．real改為really．題干中real是修飾動(dòng)詞moved，修飾動(dòng)詞要用副詞．
10．myself改為me． 句意表達(dá)的是這本小說教會(huì)了我善良可以打敗邪惡，teach oneself是自學(xué)的意思．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 短文改錯(cuò)題考查的是語境理解能力和用法基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)．�？嫉闹�識(shí)點(diǎn)有：名詞（單復(fù)數(shù)錯(cuò)誤），動(dòng)詞（時(shí)態(tài)，語態(tài)，搭配，轉(zhuǎn)換），代詞（指代錯(cuò)誤），形容詞和副詞（轉(zhuǎn)換，比較等級(jí)），連詞（and，but，or）等．偶爾也會(huì)考查邏輯錯(cuò)誤，如本來用her，卻用了his等等．解題是要注意：以句子為單位，以動(dòng)詞為中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的錯(cuò)誤；找錯(cuò)誤要以動(dòng)詞為主，動(dòng)詞或與動(dòng)詞有關(guān)的錯(cuò)誤占了改錯(cuò)的題的重要一部分．