Question

5．當(dāng)前，餐桌上的浪費(fèi)已成為嚴(yán)重的社會(huì)問(wèn)題．假如你是某校學(xué)生會(huì)主席李華，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列圖片中的內(nèi)容，在校園網(wǎng)的英語(yǔ)論壇上發(fā)表一篇倡議書(shū)．其內(nèi)容如下：
1．簡(jiǎn)述目前浪費(fèi)糧食的現(xiàn)狀．
2．簡(jiǎn)述世界糧食短缺問(wèn)題．
3．號(hào)召大家響應(yīng)"光盤行動(dòng)"，愛(ài)惜節(jié)約來(lái)之不易的糧食，并提出建議．
世界每6秒有一個(gè)兒童餓死，2億兒童營(yíng)養(yǎng)不良，300萬(wàn)死于饑餓．我國(guó)每年浪費(fèi)500億公斤，倒掉2億人的口糧．我光盤，我光榮，珍惜糧食．剩飯打包，點(diǎn)菜不多點(diǎn)．趕快加入光盤一族
參考詞匯：光盤行動(dòng)（the clear-your-plate campaign）
注意：要求：
1．短文須寫在答題卡的指定區(qū)域；
2．短文的詞數(shù)不少于100（不含已寫好的部分）；
3．內(nèi)容充實(shí)，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語(yǔ)意連貫；
4．書(shū)寫須清晰、工整．
Dear schoolmates，
   Wasting food on dining tables has become a serious social problem．____________
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Chairman of the Student Union
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇倡議書(shū)，討論食物浪費(fèi)的現(xiàn)象．屬于應(yīng)用文寫作，解題時(shí)要注意格式和口語(yǔ)化特征．用第一人稱和現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主．內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)要全，包括現(xiàn)狀，出現(xiàn)的問(wèn)題和建議．
重要短語(yǔ)和句型：
waste：浪費(fèi)
food shortages：食品短缺
environmental protection：環(huán)境保護(hù)
build a harmonious world：建立和諧世界
高分句型一：
Not only things and money are wasted，but also natural resources are abused as well．
不但浪費(fèi)錢物，而且濫用自然資源．
not only…but also…并列連詞，表示"不但…而且…"．
高分句型二：
Besides，faced with the rising energy prices，people have turned to the production of biofuels，which has worsened the severe situation．
此外，面對(duì)不斷增長(zhǎng)的能源價(jià)格，人們已經(jīng)開(kāi)始尋求生物燃料，這進(jìn)一步惡化了現(xiàn)狀．
本句過(guò)去分詞faced with the rising energy prices作時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)；which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句修飾前面整個(gè)句子內(nèi)容．
高分句型三：
Of course，to build a harmonious world the developed countries should take their responsibilities to help the poor ones experiencing food shortage．
為了建立和諧世界，發(fā)達(dá)國(guó)家要承擔(dān)起幫助貧窮國(guó)家度過(guò)食品短缺的危機(jī)的責(zé)任．
不定式to build a harmonious world the developed countries 作主語(yǔ)．

解答 Mankind is wasting things everywhere and everyday．Whenever we go，we can see that paper，bottles and cans are thrown away； food is wasted just because of poor taste； clothes are discarded simply due to their old fashion．（分析現(xiàn)狀一）Not only things and money are wasted，but also natural resources are abused as well．【高分句型一】Trees are cut down merely for fuel；wild animals are killed simply for meat；oil and coal are exploited in a bad way．（分析現(xiàn)狀二）Now I'll tell you something about our research project The World Food Crisis on behalf of our group．As you know，food shortages have hit many countries in the world and even caused social unrest in some areas．But who is responsible for the current world food crisis？First，annual world grains output has declined because of climate change．Then lots of farmland has been lost due to the rapid development of industry and urbanization．Besides，faced with the rising energy prices，people have turned to the production of biofuels，which has worsened the severe situation．【高分句型二】（分析原因）
　　Then what should we do to deal with the problem？On one hand，we should focus on the environmental protection and improve the ecology．On the other hand，strict measures should be taken to protect farmland．（解決方法）Of course，to build a harmonious world the developed countries should take their responsibilities to help the poor ones experiencing food shortage．【高分句型三】（提出建議）
　　As for me，I will call on the people around me to live thriftily．And for the moment，I think，we should study hard to develop science and help solve the food shortage in the future．（發(fā)出號(hào)召）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 書(shū)面表達(dá)題考查的是英語(yǔ)的應(yīng)用能力．寫作時(shí)要注意：要點(diǎn)的提煉要全；關(guān)鍵短語(yǔ)和句型要寫對(duì)；過(guò)渡詞和過(guò)渡短語(yǔ)要自然，通順地道；最后還要注意人稱和時(shí)態(tài)使用要正確．