Question

【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（/）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Christie was one of my best friend at my high school. At that time, we often spend time together. Thank to her help, I made a great progress in my study. Last year, she decided to study board. In another words, we would be separated for a long time. Before her leaving, I prepared a gift to show my best wishes to him. She said it was the best gift she has ever had. From then on, we’ve kept touch with each other through e-mails. I look forward to see her again in the near future.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】friend改為friends

【2】spend改為spent

【3】Thank改為Thanks

【4】去掉a

【5】board改為abroad

【6】another改為other

【7】him改為her

【8】has改為had

【9】kept后加in

【10】see改為seeing

【解析】

試題分析：考查基本語(yǔ)法知識(shí)

【1】friend改為friends；第一句“Christie was one of my best friend at my high school”中既然使用了one of，那么后面的名詞一定要用復(fù)數(shù)，故friend改為friends。

【2】spend改為spent；第二句“At that time, we often spend time together.”那時(shí)候，我們經(jīng)常在一起，顯然為過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，spend應(yīng)改為spent，注意spend過(guò)去式為不規(guī)則變化。

【3】Thank改為Thanks；第三句“Thank to her help”中thank改為thanks，thanks to表示由于，多虧了，為固定搭配。

【4】去掉a；第三句“ I made a great progress in my study.”中，progress為不可數(shù)名詞，所以應(yīng)該去掉不定冠詞a，變?yōu)閙ade great progress。

【5】borad改為abroad；第四句“Last year, she decided to study board”根據(jù)推測(cè)，作者想表達(dá)去年她決定出國(guó)留學(xué)，此處單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤，board意為板子，正確寫法為abroad。

【6】another改為other；第五句中“In another words”，another應(yīng)改為other，意為換句話說(shuō)。Another表示另一個(gè)的，一般接可數(shù)名詞單數(shù)形式。

【7】him改為her；第六句中“Before her leaving, I prepared a gift to show my best wishes to him”在她離開前，我準(zhǔn)備了一個(gè)禮物給她來(lái)表示我最誠(chéng)摯的祝福。此處應(yīng)為女她的賓格形式her。

【8】has改為had；第七句“She said it was the best gift she has ever had”她說(shuō)那是她有過(guò)的最好的禮物，前文said說(shuō)明后文應(yīng)該用過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，故has應(yīng)改為had。

【9】kept后加in；第八句“From then on, we’ve kept touch with each other through e-mails”從那時(shí)起，我們一直以電子郵件聯(lián)系。keep in touch with與……保持聯(lián)系。故kept后應(yīng)加in。

【10】see改為seeing；最后一句“I look forward to see her again in the near future.”我期待在不久的將來(lái)再次見到她。look forward to意為期待，其中to為介詞，其后動(dòng)詞為ing形式。故see應(yīng)改為seeing。