Question

【題目】書面表達

假如你是新華一中的學生李華，你從網上看到John在某英語俱樂部發(fā)布里一個帖子邀請各國愛好英語的學生家人該俱樂部，以加強交流，提高英語水平。請你根據一下要點提示，用英語寫封電子郵件。

要點：1.簡單介紹自己（如：哪國人，愛好等）

2.決定參加該俱樂部的原因（交朋友，提高英語水平）；

3.希望成為其中一員。

注意：1.詞數100左右

2.可適當增加細節(jié)，是行文連貫；開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。

Dear John,

I’m glad to read the post on the Internet that you welcome students who like English.

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear John,

I’m glad to read the post on the Internet that you welcome students who like English.I’m interested in it and want to join the club.

My name is Li Hua, a Chinese student from Xinhua No. 1 Middle School. I like English very much and have won prizes in English speech contests. I want to make full use of the chance to practise my English and speak it not only accurately but also fluently.In addition, I want to make friends with students from different countries, so that we can learn from each other to improve our English. I hope I”ll be accepted as a member of the club.

Look forward to your reply.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本文是篇郵件應用文，內容提示較簡潔，只是框架，但學生容易把握寫作要求和寫作目的�？忌�在寫作之前必修認真審題，首先要注意文章的時態(tài)，用一般現在時和將來時。人稱用第一和第二人稱。再有就是不能根據材料逐字逐句的翻譯應該注意句子的銜接，以提高作文的檔次。

【亮點說明】文章要點齊全，表達思路明確，知識點運用恰當到位，文中使用了非常好的短語，為文章增色不少，比如English speech contests，make full use of the chance，not only accurately but also fluently等。還運用了定語從句I’m glad to read the post on the Internet that you welcome students who like English。