請根據(jù)以下提示，并結(jié)合具體事例，用英語寫一篇短文。

Winners are not those who never fail but those who never give up.

注意：①無須寫標題；

②除詩歌外，文體不限；

③內(nèi)容必須結(jié)合具體事例；

④文中不得透露個人姓名和學校名稱；

⑤詞數(shù)不少于120，如引用提示語則不計入總詞數(shù)。

 

 

 

 

One possible version

There is no denying that everyone desires to be a winner in whatever they do, but people tend to ignore the fact that every winner has experienced failure before they win. If they give up in face of failure, they will definitely not win in the end.

Mayun will never forget his experience. Twenty years ago, when he tried to find a job, he found the door to success closed before him one after another, just because of his bad-looking appearance. However, he didn’t lose heart and stuck to his dream until he became a successful CEO in the end.

In conclusion, failure is a necessary part on our way to be a winner, so never give up and keep on going until you win. (125 words)

【解析】

試題分析：題目要求根據(jù)英文提示并結(jié)合事例寫一篇短文。提示語的意思是“成功者不是從不失敗，而是從不放棄 。如果我們成為一個成功的人，我們就必須做好充分的準備，不怕失敗，不放棄”。作文不需寫標題，不得照抄提示語；除詩歌外，文體不限；不得出現(xiàn)個人姓名和學校名稱；詞數(shù)在120詞左右；不要出現(xiàn)標點和拼寫錯誤，盡量保持卷面整潔、字體美觀；注意行文的連貫性。

亮點說明：

范文使用了較多的語法知識：常用句型There is no denying that everyone desires to be a winner in whatever they do, but people tend to ignore the fact that every winner has experienced failure before they win；if條件從句If they give up in face of failure, they will definitely not win in the end.；讓步狀語從句However, he didn’t lose heart and stuck to his dream until he became a successful CEO in the end.；短語on the way to do sth 等，顯示了較高的運用英語語法知識的能力；范文注意使用However, From then on, From this story等銜接前后句和上下文，做到了語意連貫、銜接緊湊；

范文使用了一些固定短語：desire to do，tend to，in face of failure，bad-looking appearance，stuck to his dream，In conclusion等，豐富了作文的內(nèi)容。

考點：材料類作文

 

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