Question

“百善孝為先"是中國人的傳統(tǒng)美德。請根據(jù)以下提示，談談你對“孝”的理解。
提示：

1．你認為“孝”是什么?
2．以你自己或身邊人的事例說明。
注意：
1．文章開頭已給出，不計人總詞
2．文中不得透露個人和學校信息；
3．詞數(shù)1 20左右；
4．參考詞匯：孝順filial piety
It is universally accepted that filial piety is an important virtue in China．                        
                                                                                    
                                                                                       

Answer 1

It is universally accepted that filial piety is an important virtue in China. It means respecting and caring for parents and the elderly.?
　　Take my parents for example. After my grandma died last year, my parents spent much  time chatting with my grandpa, accompanying him on walks and cooking him delicious food. At first, my grandpa seemed to be happy about it, but as time went by, he became uneasy, because he was not used to leading so comfortable a life. Therefore, my parents encouraged him to attend some activities in our community. They also encouraged him to go to a drawing class in a school for the old, which gave my grandpa a great sense of achievement. He became happy again.
　　My parents set a good example to me. In my opinion, the real filial piety is giving the old what they really need.?

試題分析：考查半開放性作文寫作,開放性作文給出了一個話題，并簡單的要點提示。要求考生自由發(fā)揮，對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。在完成半開放性作文時，首先涵蓋要點，還要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個人觀點的時候，可以使用諺語來提升整個文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。
【亮點說明】文章使用了很好的短語和句子： Take … for example“拿…舉例”，be used to doing“習慣于做…”， so comfortable a life“這么舒服的生活”，. Encourage sb. to do鼓勵某人做…，set a good example to “為…樹立榜樣”，After my grandma died last year, my parents spent much  time chatting with my grandpa, accompanying him on walks and cooking him delicious food. 這句話用了非謂語動詞， They also encouraged him to go to a drawing class in a school for the old, which gave my grandpa a great sense of achievement.這句話用了非限制性定語從句， In my opinion, the real filial piety is giving the old what they really need.這句話用了賓語從句。