10．假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分
In New York there are some neighborhoods are full of people from same country．For example，in the southern part of the city has New York's Chinatown．New Yorkers from all part of the city like to go here．They enjoy shopping at the Chinese stores and eat at the Chinese restaurants．But most of the people live in Chinatown are Chinese．The shop signs are all writing in Chinese．Everyone in the shops speak Chinese．This is one of the crowding and colorful neighborhoods in the city．

分析 本文介紹了紐約唐人街的情況，唐人街的位置，他們的生活起居購(gòu)物等情況．

解答 In New York there are some neighborhoodsare full of people from∧same country．For example，in the southern part of the city has New York's Chinatown．New Yorkers from all part of the city like to gohere．They enjoy shopping at the Chinese stores and eat at the Chinese restaurants．But most of the people live in Chinatown are Chinese．The shop signs are all writing in Chinese．Everyone in the shops speak Chinese．This is one of the crowding and colorful neighborhoods in the city．
1．去掉are 考查固定句型．本句是一個(gè)there be 結(jié)構(gòu)的句子，在后文neighborhoods are full of people from same country這里的are是多余的，full of 在句中做定語(yǔ)修飾neighborhoods．
2．same前面加the 考查固定搭配．the same 是英語(yǔ)中的固定搭配，the是冠詞，此處為特指．
3．has改成is 考查倒裝．本句的主語(yǔ)是New York's Chinatown，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用單數(shù)．句意：中國(guó)的唐人街在紐約南部．
4．part改為parts 考查名詞的數(shù)．part 是可數(shù)名詞"部分"前面用all修飾，所以應(yīng)該用復(fù)數(shù)形式．
5．here改為there 考查副詞．根據(jù)句意：在紐約其他地方的人都喜歡去那里．所以用there．
6．eat改為eating 考查非謂語(yǔ)．enjoy的并列賓語(yǔ)是shopping和eating，所以用動(dòng)名詞做賓語(yǔ)．
7．live改為living 考查非謂語(yǔ)．此處用填的是定語(yǔ)living是現(xiàn)在分詞在句中做定語(yǔ)修飾people，people與live之間是主謂關(guān)系．
8．writing改為written  考查被動(dòng)．The shop signs 與write之間是被動(dòng)關(guān)系，應(yīng)該用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)，所以填written．
9．speak改為speaks 考查主謂一致．Everyone做主語(yǔ)謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用單數(shù)，因?yàn)槲恼聰⑹鲇玫氖且话悻F(xiàn)在時(shí)，所以speaks．
10．crowding 改為crowded 考查形容詞．此處要填寫定語(yǔ)crowded是形容詞"擁擠的"．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 短文改錯(cuò)首先要通讀全文，了解短文的中心思想，再分析句式結(jié)構(gòu)，弄清句子間的結(jié)構(gòu)關(guān)系，然后運(yùn)用所掌握的語(yǔ)法，詞匯等基本知識(shí)找出錯(cuò)誤加以改正．

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