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4．上周一，一個(gè)福建醫(yī)學(xué)院大學(xué)的李教授針對(duì)"青少年意外傷害自救能力的現(xiàn)狀與建議"做了一次兩個(gè)小時(shí)的報(bào)告．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示內(nèi)容，寫一篇短文：
（1）意外傷害的發(fā)生呈逐年上升的趨勢(shì)．在中國(guó)，每年約有20萬(wàn)少年兒童死于意外傷害．意外傷害已經(jīng)成為青少年健康的"第一殺手"；
（2）青少年對(duì)急救知識(shí)缺乏了解；
（3）建議加強(qiáng)青少年對(duì)意外傷害急救的教育．
注意：
（1）詞數(shù)100-120；
（2）可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
（3）參考詞匯：醫(yī)科大學(xué) Medical University；意外傷害accidental injury；自救self rescue
Last Monday，Professor Li from Fujian Medical University gave us a report on teenagers'accidental injury and self rescue．The report lasted two hours．
Professor Li said that the rate of accidental injury is increasing year by year．In China，about 200，000 children die of accidental injury each year．Accidental injury has become the leading cause of death for teenagers．However，most teenagers lack the basic knowledge of first aid．In fact a knowledge of first aid can really make a real difference．
At the end of the report，Professor Li called on us to realize the importance of gaining the first aid knowledge．He said that it was high time that we teenagers received education on first aid．．

Answer 1

分析 本文為報(bào)告，報(bào)告主題為：青少年意外傷害自救能力的現(xiàn)狀與建議．
寫作要點(diǎn)為：（1）意外傷害的發(fā)生呈逐年上升的趨勢(shì)．在中國(guó)，每年約有20萬(wàn)少年兒童死于意外傷害．意外傷害已經(jīng)成為青少年健康的"第一殺手"；
（2）青少年對(duì)急救知識(shí)缺乏了解；
（3）建議加強(qiáng)青少年對(duì)意外傷害急救的教育．

解答 Last Monday，Professor Li from Fujian Medical University gave us a report on teenagers'accidental injury and self rescue．The report lasted two hours．
Professor Li said that the rate of accidental injury is increasing year by year．In China，about 200，000 children die of accidental injury each year．Accidental injury has become the leading cause of death for teenagers．However，most teenagers lack the basic knowledge of first aid．In fact a knowledge of first aid can really make a real difference．
At the end of the report，Professor Li called on us to realize the importance of gaining the first aid knowledge．He said that it was high time that we teenagers received education on first aid．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考生需了解寫作要點(diǎn)及寫作意圖，合理安排寫作結(jié)構(gòu)，平時(shí)注意積累詞匯及語(yǔ)法知識(shí)．