【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Yesterday morning, I heard a piece of news which my friend Li Lei was admitted to the hospital because of the car accident. The day before yesterday, Li Lei is going to a bookstore to buy a book. He was very carefully when he got to the crossroads. He crossed the street when the traffic light turned to green. However, if he just went to the middle of the street, a car suddenly appeared at his right-hand side and came directly towards him. The driver drove fast and it was too late to avoiding it. Li Lei was knocked by the car. She was carried to the hospital immediately and had a surgery. Last night, I visited him. He looked pale unless he was out of danger.

【答案】1.第一句: which改為that

2.car前的the 改為 a

3.第二句: is 改為 was

4.第三句: carefully改為careful

5.第四句: 去掉to

6.第五句: if 改為when

7.第六句: avoiding改為avoid

8.第七句: knocked ∧ by 加 down

9.第八句: She改為He

10.第十句: unless改為although/though

【解析】文章詳細(xì)描述了李雷遭遇車禍的經(jīng)過及結(jié)果。

1. 第一句：which改為that.考查同位語從句。句中從句是news的同位語從句用that引導(dǎo)解釋說明news的內(nèi)容，不用which，故which改為that。

2. car前的the改為a.考查冠詞。此處指一次車禍，而不是特指，用不定冠詞，故the改為 a。

3. 第二句：is 改為 was.考查時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)時(shí)間狀語The day before yesterday可知用過去時(shí)，此處是過去將來時(shí)，故is改為was。

4. 第三句：carefully改為careful. 考查形容詞。用于動(dòng)詞be之后作表語用形容詞不用副詞，故 carefully改為careful。

5. 第四句：去掉to. 考查動(dòng)詞。turn作系動(dòng)詞，表示“轉(zhuǎn)變”，后加形容詞作表語。在這里指交通燈變綠要用turn作系動(dòng)詞；而turn to意為“轉(zhuǎn)向，求助于”，不符合此處意思，故去掉to。

6. 第五句：if 改為when.考查連詞。句意：然而，當(dāng)他走到道路中央時(shí)，一輛車突然從右邊出現(xiàn)朝著他沖過來。此處表示時(shí)間不是假設(shè)，故if 改為when。

7. 第六句：avoiding改為avoid. 考查動(dòng)詞形式。此處是too…to句型，表示“太……而不能”。 to后用動(dòng)詞原形，故avoiding改為avoid。

8. 第七句：knocked ∧ by 加 down .考查動(dòng)詞短語。knock down意為“擊倒，撞倒”，此處指李雷被車撞倒。故knocked ∧ by 加 down。

9. 第八句：She改為He. 考查代詞。文章的主人公是李雷，全文用he指代，故She改為He。

10. 第十句：unless改為although/though.考查連詞。句意：盡管他脫離了危險(xiǎn)但看起來很蒼白。此處表示轉(zhuǎn)折不是條件，故unless改為although/though。

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