Question

10．請閱讀下面文字，并按照要求用英語寫一篇150詞左右的文章．
Every year，when new school year begins，many Chinese parents of freshmen（大學(xué)一年級新生） insist on accompanying their children to universities．Other than proudly witnessing the moment when their children step into universities，parents insist that they should assist with any unexpected problems their children might face．
In order to teach incoming freshmen their first lesson in independence，Tsinghua University has set up a"parents-restricted"area where students have to go through the enrollment （入學(xué)）procedure all by themselves．On social networking sites like www．renren．com，students are inviting their peers to go to university together，not only for safety，but also to avoid parents'overprotection．
寫作內(nèi)容
1．用約30個單詞概括上述信息的主要內(nèi)容；
2．用約120個單詞闡述你對"家長送孩子上大學(xué)"這一現(xiàn)象的看法，并用2～3個理由或論據(jù)支撐你的看法．
寫作要求
1．寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句；
2．作文中不能直接出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱；
3．不必寫標題．
Every year，there are many freshmen in China who are accompanied by their parents to college enrollment．However，Tsinghua University and some social networking sites encourage students to go it alone or with their peers．
In my opinion，it's unnecessary for parents to follow their children to universities．Children shouldn't be spoiled and letting them enroll alone is a good opportunity to develop their self-reliance ability．After all，they have to learn to e independent and take care of themselves when they are far away from their parents．Besides，it's a good idea for new college students to invite their peers as their travelling companions．Chances are that they will make friends with each other．Therefore，the fewer accompanying parents there are，the better，so students will become more independent and their social skills will be improved．As for parents，they are expressing their true love when they let their children go．．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認真審題，找準提示語中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準確定位人稱、時態(tài)．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等
高分句型一：
Besides，it's a good idea for new college students to invite their peers as their travelling companions
除此之外，對于新大學(xué)生去邀請同行的旅伴是個不錯的主意．
高分句型二：
Therefore，the fewer accompanying parents there are，the better，so students will become more independent and their social skills will be improved．
因此，父母越少陪伴他們會越好，學(xué)生會變得更加獨立，他們的社交能力會有所提高．

解答 Every year，there are many freshmen in China who are accompanied by their parents to college enrollment．However，Tsinghua University and some social networking sites encourage students to go it alone or with their peers．
In my opinion，it's unnecessary for parents to follow their children to universities．Children shouldn't be spoiled and letting them enroll alone is a good opportunity to develop their self-reliance ability．After all，they have to learn to e independent and take care of themselves when they are far away from their parents．Besides，it's a good idea for new college students to invite their peers as their travelling companions（高分句型一）．Chances are that they will make friends with each other．Therefore，the fewer accompanying parents there are，the better，so students will become more independent and their social skills will be improved（高分句型二）．As for parents，they are expressing their true love when they let their children go．

點評 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎(chǔ)進行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學(xué)生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語言運用和組織方面的能力，而且對學(xué)生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．