Question

【題目】假定你是你校學(xué)生會主席李華，一個來自英國的中英傳統(tǒng)文化交流團到你校進行為期一周的傳統(tǒng)文化交流。其中有一項活動是邀請他們參加由著名專家王教授到你校所作的關(guān)于中國刺繡的講座。請你就有關(guān)事項給 他們寫一封郵件，邀請他們參加。要點如下：

1. 自我介紹，表示歡迎；

2. 講座的主題及意義；

3. 講座的時間，地點；

4. 其它事項。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

參考詞匯： 刺繡embroidery ；手工藝品handicraft

Dear respected friends,

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Student Union

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear respected friends,

Welcome to our school. I am Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union. I am honored to invite you to attend a lecture on Chinese traditional culture with us.

Firstly, the theme of the lecture is Chinese Embroidery, a world-famous traditional handicraft, which is significant to your better understanding of our traditional culture. Besides, the lecture by professor Wang, an expert in Chinese embroidery, is scheduled to be held in Lecture Hall 102 from 2:30 p.m.to 5:30 p.m.tomorrow. Lastly, you can ask him some questions and have a discussion with us after the lecture and you can call me at 13575862212, if you have any questions.

In brief, it is my sincere hope that you can have an unforgettable time. Looking forward to your reply.

Student Union

Li Hua

【解析】

本文屬于應(yīng)用文。要求寫一封邀請信。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文

時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時。

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法

總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。

要求：1.表達歡迎

2.告知講座的相關(guān)情況

1）此次講座的大體介紹。（introduction to this lecture）

2）講座的時間和地點。（the time and place of the lecture）

第二步:列提綱 （重點詞組）

am honored to; attend a lecture; Chinese traditional culture; the theme of; is significant to; is scheduled to; have a discussion with; In brief; look forward to

第三步：連詞成句

1. I am honored to invite you to attend a lecture on Chinese traditional culture with us.

2. The theme of the lecture is Chinese Embroidery.

3. The lecture is scheduled to be held in Lecture Hall.

4. You can have a discussion with us.

5. Looking forward to your reply.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列補充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對比關(guān)系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(從句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步：潤色修改