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16．假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文．文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(xiàn)（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線(xiàn)，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
             2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
Dear dad，
You're such busy every day that you don't pay much attention to your health．I really worry about my health all the time．I'd like to give you some suggestion．As far as I'm concerned，walking is good sport．Your company was not far from our home．Why not walk to the office？You had better take exercise in least once a week，like playing tennis in the gym．Go to swim is also a nice choice．Besides，it's necessary to have health food．
Try not to staying up too late．Having enough sleep can make your brain to work better．
Best wishes to you!
Your loving son，
Tom．

Answer 1

分析 本文主要介紹兒子給父親提的一些注意健康的建議．1．要走路去上班； 2．每周至少去體育館鍛煉一次，或打球、或游泳； 3．飲食要健康； 4．不要工作太晚，要早休息．

解答 Dear dad，
You're such busy every day that you don't pay much attention to your health．I really worry about my health all the time．I'd like to give you some suggestion．As far as I'm concerned，walking is∧good sport．Your company was not far from our home．Why not walk to the office？You had better take exercise in least once a week，like playing tennis in the gym．Go to swim is also a nice choice．Besides，it's necessary to have health food．
Try not to staying up too late．Having enough sleep can make your brain to work better．
Best wishes to you!
Your loving son，
Tom．詳解：
1．such改為so 考查固定句型．so…that…意為"如此/這么…以致于…"，句型中的so是副詞，常常用來(lái)修飾形容詞或副詞，常用句型為：主語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ)+so+adj．/adv．+that從句．
2．my改為your 考查代詞．your與前文中的you一致，指代dear dad．
3．suggestion改為suggestions 考查名詞復(fù)數(shù)．suggestion是可數(shù)名詞，其前有some修飾時(shí)用復(fù)數(shù)形式．
4．加a 考查冠詞．sport表示"某項(xiàng)運(yùn)動(dòng)"時(shí)，其前可加不定冠詞a．
5．was改為is 考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)．全文講述的是一般事實(shí)，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．
6．in改為at 考查動(dòng)詞搭配．a(chǎn)t least意為"至少"，是固定搭配．
7．Go改為Going 考查動(dòng)名詞．分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)，句中缺少主語(yǔ)，用動(dòng)名詞短語(yǔ)going to swim作主語(yǔ)．
8．health改為healthy 考查形容詞．food是名詞，用形容詞修飾作定語(yǔ)．
9．staying改為stay 考查動(dòng)詞不定式．此處to是不定式符號(hào)，后接動(dòng)詞原形．
10．去掉to 考查動(dòng)詞不定式．make后接動(dòng)詞不定式時(shí)用不帶to的動(dòng)詞不定式．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 高考短文改錯(cuò)題的形式有說(shuō)明文，短文故事，書(shū)信等，具有很強(qiáng)的實(shí)用性．短文的內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言都符合高中學(xué)生的實(shí)際，從表面上看類(lèi)似一篇學(xué)生習(xí)作．首先，通讀全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱(chēng)及行文邏輯，在通讀全文時(shí)把一些容易的錯(cuò)誤先改好，再進(jìn)行逐句改錯(cuò)．其次，要進(jìn)行逐個(gè)句子的改錯(cuò)．這是要對(duì)文中的詞法、句法和語(yǔ)篇著重分析和特別注意．最后把改好的短文再閱讀一遍，檢查答案是否正確，感覺(jué)是否還有不妥之處，最終形成定稿．